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 Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 7:24 pm
He passed away 3 or 4 years ago i believe
Wake Up
You lye down in bed, as if you were dead.
Will you ever wake up from your awful dream?
Please I’m begging you, don’t leave me.
You don’t deserve to leave this way.
Please wake up, wake up today.
You were meant to live on.
Can’t you see, God wants you to stay here for me.
Fight the pain, for if you do your health will gain.
The disease within you has killed many people.
Yet I believe with the power you behold anything is possible.
You can fight it, I know you can.
Your strong, you can trust me, I’m never wrong.
Believe in yourself as you told me too.
Please just wake up, wake up today.
I hear your heart beating.
Your alive I know you are.
Open your eyes show I’m not mistaken.
Have you finally awaken.
I guess I will never see you again.
So I suppose I’m leaving for now and forever.
Wait, I see you’ve opened your eyes.
Your mouth starts to move, words departure as,
You say “I’m here for you, I won’t ever leave.”
At first my tears started disappearing from my eyes,
And no more did you see or hear my cries.
Then with a sudden rush of wind.
I see you close your eyes and die.
“NO,” I yell from the top of my lungs.
Wake up, Wake up, don’t leave me this way.
All of a sudden, I hear your voice come back,
“I didn’t leave you I will always be right above you.”
So I shouldn’t say wake up,
For you yourself have become my guardian from above.
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Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 7:25 pm
Heres another one i wrote about rumors
Rumors
Stop with your rumors
They don’t make you cool ,
But they do make the people you’re talking about call you a fool.
What makes you want to lie?
Why do you do it, what’s the purpose?
You hurt other people with lies you’ve created.
Stop sinning, because your really losing not winning.
You’re losing peoples trust.
You’re losing your friends.
So now I’ll tell you, that this is where it ends.
Stop your rumors there's still time,
Time for you to hope people forgive you for your crime.
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Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 8:18 pm
I love the first poem about your Grandpa, it's got a saddened fearful person realizing the person who left let's their soul reside, watching you from above. It's sweet.
And the second is just fun, and it tells the losers to stop this lying of roomers and get a life!
Love them both, your a very good poet.
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Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 9:42 pm
bi_boitoy I love the first poem about your Grandpa, it's got a saddened fearful person realizing the person who left let's their soul reside, watching you from above. It's sweet. And the second is just fun, and it tells the losers to stop this lying of roomers and get a life! Love them both, your a very good poet. Thanks, thats really nice of you to say.
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 7:32 am
the first one almost made me cry. my great grandpa passed away last february and about 5 days later my friend kenny shot himself.
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 3:56 pm
Shaya.aleytys the first one almost made me cry. my great grandpa passed away last february and about 5 days later my friend kenny shot himself. Thats really sad, i was outside when my grandpa died, a relative was on the phone and i heard him say, He died just now he also gave the time and date.
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 6:37 pm
the first one is realy good, but the second one is only ok. also the word roomer means someone renting a room, the word you meant to write is rumor.
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 8:59 pm
frankenkitty666 the first one is realy good, but the second one is only ok. also the word roomer means someone renting a room, the word you meant to write is rumor. thanks i know i had a mistake because when i looked up the word i wasn't sure why the definition said that
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Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 12:05 am
thank you for correcting it, spelling errors make me crazy.
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Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 4:45 pm
frankenkitty666 thank you for correcting it, spelling errors make me crazy. lol your welcome.
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