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 Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 9:07 am
I’ve looked upon this world for love
when I should have turned to God above
the guys I’ve met have let me down
I’m to hurt to make a sound
the things I do to impress the 'best'
just to realize he's like the rest
guys were born to break your heart
I to cry again but yet I start
Baby-girl and Cutie Pie
are names I’ve heard from many guys
I sit alone in the dark
with these matches I hope to get a spark
to burn the promises, pretty lies and empty words
my love has flown away with the birds
flames are burning hot like the in my veins
my tears trickle down my cheeks like acid rain
the same mistake I keep repeating
I hold on tight even when he's cheating
they say all I want is to fit in
but wanting to be loved is not a sin
I’m not acting like me anymore
and I’m losing my own war
will someone please come save me
this isn't who I want to be
the things I’ve done for attention
I feel like I’m in life detention
just shut your mouth
leave me alone
I wont let you into my hearts home
I can't believe the games you play
or even a single word you say
you broke me once, twice and then
I fell for your stupid trick again
you can say you've changed all you want
but thoughts of me will bother you, and forever haunt
you've taught me that I can't trust anyone
you’re the last guy that I’ll call Hun
I believe a heart is for
men to take then break- for sure
mark my words like there a curse
you'll feel guilt and soon remorse.
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Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 3:39 pm
WOW that was really really good
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 6:53 am
you've got a few typos, missing words and such.
but the poem is good. and i liked it
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Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 12:17 am
you need to edit it for typos, but the poem itself is very good. also true, guys suck.
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