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 Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 12:27 am
Check out my journal and tell me what you think about my poetry/songs.
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Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 12:31 am
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Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 12:36 am
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Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 12:38 am
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Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 12:57 am
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Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2007 2:13 pm
You have probably been discouraged by the lack of comments about your poems. For that, I am sorry. But perhaps some people find it difficult to read your poems from your journal. It might be a good idea for you to post some of them here. But that's only a suggestion. As for myself, I'll head to your journal right now and see what's there.
*edit* Woops, your journal preferences aren't set and I can't view it.
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Posted: Sun Sep 30, 2007 7:08 am
those are very pretty, the only comment I can offer is keep your syllables in more carefully regulated phrases. lovely! biggrin
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