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 Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 3:05 pm
Hi everyone. I started working on a short story a few days ago, and although I haven't gotten much done with it, it'll probably be done in a weeks time. So in the mean time, here's the opening paragraph. Hope you enjoy!
As the smoke disappeared and the dust settled, a lone man stood right where the chaos was at its thickest. His friends saw him and ran to him. "Axl! Axl! Are you alright," one of his friends asked. The man looked up with a face that could only describe as utter sickness and said "Jason, never let me order the enchiladas ever again." This is a story of a man, a toilet rigged to explode, and some really bad enchiladas.
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Posted: Fri Mar 23, 2007 2:11 pm
Oh come on, does the intro suck that much that noone will leave a comment?
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Posted: Fri Mar 23, 2007 8:38 pm
lmao <3 well thats.. one of the strangest plots ever<3 ^_^ will there be more in the future?
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Posted: Sat Mar 24, 2007 1:41 am
Omg that is so good!
I thought is said echidna's I was all "WTF!!??!!"
It is really funny now I reread it!
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Posted: Sat Mar 24, 2007 1:07 pm
~Inu-Onee-chan~ lmao <3 well thats.. one of the strangest plots ever<3 ^_^ will there be more in the future? I'm still writing it as we speak. I have the story figured out, now just picking the rights words for it, which is kinda hard >_<.
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Posted: Wed May 16, 2007 1:53 am
I like it, I lol'd xD
I love writing, but i never finish my stories..
>_>
lame.
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Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2007 3:43 pm
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