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Moleje
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 4:24 pm


I realized that there may be a need for a poem critic section.
Well I hope I'm not wrong about this...


This is my favorite poem of Nezzy da Nezz's so far.
I wish my summers were more like that.
Back in school the fun of summer would always fizzle out...
Then it was just the anxt of waiting for schools return.

I had to change the color, I just can't read in lightgreen.

Nezzy da Nezz


Dreams of Summer
Writen for my School Teacher, Nicolette ^^


I bath, I dive, I swim,
Into the shimmering pools of golden Summer,
The lament of birds do draw me deeper.
Into my dreams of Summer.

I press deeper, deeper into the rich, warm haze of my Summer fantisies,
Deeper away, from the unforgiving blight of winter's chill.
I keep beat, to my regal march and stride deeper.
Into my dreams of Summer.

I search farther, my eager hand drawing away each and every veil of silver mist,
But my now dancing hands cannot through, the obfuscating wall of Time,
That stands, at the ready, between me and my heart's desire.
That wish to bring me deeper.
Into my dreams of Summer.

But then, oh joy, the barrier tis gone!
But alas, not so, for even as I leep marrily forward,
I am drawn back, for Reason is holding me captive,
I struggle forward, yet in vain I now learn,
Now I do know, I will have to wait,
So even as the realm of my summer fantisy fades away yonder,
My dream it does not die, for I know that one day, one day,
I will sink again, sink deeper still,
Into my dreams of Summer.
PostPosted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 6:21 pm


*huggles* I'm glad you like it ^^

- Xenn be Twisted -

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