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Review: 9.0/10.0 [I'm weird and don't like giving anything behind the decimal point at all.]

Appearance and Personality I dearly love deep down along with her short bio also.

Like Raze-chan had said a cultural instrument might work better for her instead of a scythe since she is a type of bat the sound waves would work great with her. Henshin wise, since she somewhat tomboyish...uh wow I would think of something dark but have a nice fast pace beat to it would work great. She like what Raze said follows by the thread she made almost cleary.

Overall I love Panpukin~! She's so cute and she's one of the better tomboyish mew mews I've seen around Gaia.

I shall post my OC in a couple days, she's a new one too. >.<

Name:
Koganeshiro Buruberi // Gold White Blueberry.
Age:
14 // Fourteen.
Gender:
Girl // Female.
Birthday:
February 15th.
Star Sign:
Aquarius.
Blood Type:
B- // B negative.
Orientation:
Straight // Heterosexual.
Personality:
Buruberi is the kind of girl who likes to be the leader, to the point of even being bossy and a bit pushy. She isn’t the kind to get angry so easily either. If someone is bugging her on purpose she will ask them calmly why they are doing it rather then lash out. She can be quite level-headed too during hectic situations, especially in battle. She is also quite brave at times too. She also isn’t afraid to say what’s on her mind, though this doesn’t mean that she will just speak to about anyone about her problems. She is actually quite picky when it comes to friends so it takes her a while before she accepts you.

When it comes to a situation where it has two sides to it, Buruberi is the one that will step back and try to get the story from both sides before coming up with a solution. Buruberi can be a very thoughtful person at times and very caring towards other, even if she doesn’t show it all that often. This is because she isn’t that used to showing intermit emotions and gets embarrassed about it at times, especially if someone mentions it. She often thinks how she would feel if she was in that person’s shoes, making her a very open-minded person also. When it comes to working at the café, Buruberi is fairly helpful but will sometimes get lazy about it and will take breaks every now and then.

At times Buruberi can seem a bit optimistic. But not very much. Well she doesn’t go around jumping in the air every time something good happens to her. But she does try to look on the bright side of things. Also when it comes to someone saying that they have a problem, Buruberi is the one who will think it through then make a suggestion to that person about their problems. She may be picky about friends, but that doesn’t mean to cares about them. It’s the human condition after all. When working at the cafe Buruberi will work but sometimes she has breaks, despite the fact that she is always bossing everyone else around. This can cause her to seem a bit of a hypocrite. She also has a bit of a wry sense of humour.
Short Bio:
Buruberi grew up in a rich environment – literally. Her father is the CPO of a really big computer company. Her mother prefers to stay at home in their mansion. As a child Buruberi loved having her mother around so much because she knew that most rich kids hardly ever get to see their parents, even if it was just one.

But she also missed her father a lot because he was hardly ever around, even when he was home. But now Buruberi has gotten used to not having her father around. She even admits that she doesn’t have a close-relationship with him like she has with her mother, which she feels disappointed about. But she thinks that it’s too late now to have another go at it again.
Civilian Appearance:
Buruberi stands five foot two in height and weighs around one hundred and nine pounds. Her hair is a rich blonde colour and is a bit on the wavy side and ends a little way past her shoulders, almost to her elbows. Her eyes are a dark blue colour and are fairly large.

Her skin is a fairly pale colour, though not much. She is quite curvy also in some areas of her body. She is 12B in bra size. When it comes to clothes Buruberi prefers to wear skirts or dresses but she will sometimes wear pants or jeans also. With cosmetics Buruberi likes to wear mascara on her eye lashes, lip gloss (usually pink) and sometimes even eye liner which is usually black. She also sometimes likes to decorate her fingernails.
DNA:
Alaena margaritacea.
Mew Mew Name:
Mew Mew Blueberry.
Mew Mew Appearance:
Buruberi’s hair colour turns to a lighter blonde colour and is up in a high ponytail. Her hair is held up by a white frilly hair band and a few strands of her hair falls down from it at the sides of her face, appearing a bit wavy. Her eyes are a much lighter blue too. A light blue choker is around her neck with white frills at the edges with the common golden pendant hanging from it.

A pair of light blue puffy arm bands is on her upper arms with white frills. A light blue dress covers most of her torso and has a fairly long V-neck. The dress also splits apart once it’s past her hips and it ends at her mid-thighs. But not to worry for there is another dress underneath. This one is white and has long frills at the ends. The dress can also be seen at Buruberi’s chest at the V-neck where it also has frills on it also. A pair of large, white butterfly wings with black markings are at the middle of her back. The gloves that Buruberi wears are white and end shortly at her wrists a bit.

This is because they actually fold over the gloves, but not completely, only near the wrist is where the folds stop. She has a light blue leg band on her left thigh with white frills at the edges. A pair of baggy white shoes conceals her feet that have the same folds as her gloves do. They end almost to her knees.
Henshin:
Henshin song is i -crossin' the star- by Yuki Kimura.
Weapon:
Attack:

[m i n t y]'s Buruberi

Let's see... nice name meaning, but it doesn't really fit, seeing as her main color is blue, not gold (the human name's of the Mews generally reflect their main colors plus some sort of geographical feature with the exception of Ichigo's "shrine" and Purin's "bell").

As usual, you've done a wonderful job with her personality. Hah hah, I fail hardcore at characterizations like that. XP

The bio is good, considering its length. I like how you gave her a mother instead of doing the typical "no parents at home" routine that one sees too often with the excessively wealthy fan Mews.

A butterfly, huh? Neat. Too bad it's only vunerable; I wonder if that would compromise her status as a Mew...

Very descriptive with her Mew outfit. I like it. heart

Ah... since you're missing her weapon and attack, I kinda had to take points off. So... 8.0/10.0 for her so far. Finish her profile and it'll probably go up a bit. :3

Panpukin's henshin theme

Ah... for some reason, it just doesn't seem to fit her. Perhaps it's because I'm old-fashioned and tend to see characters with her "Halloween"-ish traits to be better with Industrial/Goth music. I have a few tracks in that category if you're interested. ^^

<^>

And now. . . I feel it is my turn to totally make a fool of myself and watch as my character is torn asunder due to my utter lack of writing ability.

|Name| Kuroyama Rikorisuu
|Age| 15
|Birthday| April twelfth*
|Orientation| Heterosexual
|Psychological Status| A twitchy, timid girl with a habit of running from anything too exciting or dangerous or especially risky in any way. . . pretty much anything, come to think of it. For her, where she is running to is never an issue, as all that matters is what she is running from. Though one might argue that this sort of behavior will probably end with her being in even more trouble, she is likely to just run away from that, too.

On top of being a huge coward, Riko is also quite the little pessimist. Her philosophy is simple: if she continually believes the worst is going to happen in any and all situations, she will continually be pleasantly surprised when something not-so-bad happens instead. Of course, this attitude has cost her quite a few potential friendships, so she tries to keep her thoughts just that; her thoughts. She has her moody moments as well, but. . . those are few and far between, as it’s rather difficult to mope and be rude when you’re running away from a group of burly men with guns**.

Overall, Riko is most calm when she is somewhere that other people would consider boring, like at home or out at the park in a crowd of fellow “GothLolis”. The whole concept of being a Mew Mew frightens her and she sorely wishes she was never chosen to be one (though she rather likes the uniform).

|Physical Status| Standing at 155cm and weighing somewhere around 55kg, she has a thin, wispy build, appearing to be at least four years younger than she actually is, her large, chocolate brown eyes not helping this fact in the least. Her skin tone is a pale pinkish hue, though it typically appears to be a bit more pallid when put into contrast with her chin-length black hair, the locks of which frame her face. Her hairstyle lacks fringe; instead, it is parted in the middle with a lock from each side pinned up just behind her ears. The hairpins are typically unnoticed due to being covered with a black bonnet, trimmed with white lace. Crinoline, lace, and tulle abound in her fanciful outfits, which are modest only in the fact that they cover nearly every centimeter of her body; the skirts typically cut off at her knees, her legs encased in black knee socks with white lace trim, feet covered with black Mary Jane shoes.

|Life| Kuroyama Rikorisuu has had the most normal life ever. . . or, that’s what she’s pretty sure of, at least. Actually. . . she can’t really remember anything before about two months ago, when she woke up on an ornate Victorian style bed wearing clothing better suited for a doll than a girl. Her housemates (four boys, three around her age and one seeming to still be in elementary school) had taken turns explaining she had just gotten over a long illness and that she was right where she belonged. Instead of questioning this odd excuse, she felt the overwhelming urge to simply accept what she was told and go about her life. She does not attend school, though she was told that she graduated from Daikanyama Junior High the previous year. The oldest of the boys, known to her as Akizuki Yuuzen, had told her that she was “perfectly fine” the way she was, adding on that she was to be the one to help them (and by them, she assumed he was talking about the other boys) start “a grand new world.” How? She hadn’t the foggiest idea. Again, she accepted it, despite a faint little voice in the back of her mind screaming in protest. She has often wondered if was Yuuzen had said had anything to do with the odd, rose-like marking just below her sternum or the reoccurring dreams involving a girl in a “cute cosplay” outfit taking down various petty criminals around the city, but she is usually too distracted by something else to really think about any sort of correlation between the two.

More recently, she has become a fangirl of the members of the Tokyo Mew Mew team, even going as far as to have purchased a cosplay set modeled after the pink Mew (she made a few modifications to fit her normal outfits, of course; the bow on the tail was replaced with a bit of lacy white ribbon with a silver jingle bell fastened to the middle). She really wants to see them in person, but with the decline of monster activity in the city, there has been no need for them.

|DNAl| Greater bilby**

|Mew Name| Mew Mew Licorice

|Henshin|*** At the call of Mew Mew Licorice, metamorphose!, the screen momentarily shows a still shot of her silver henshin locket on a black background, then cracks and shatters like a mirror to show the pseudo-nude form of Riko in the middle of the screen. She is floating with her hands clasped over her stomach, just below her breasts, a pale pink light shimmering from between them. A pair of CGI DNA strands, one pink and one maroon, coil in the background, crossing over each other.

The zooming in for a better view of her mark, the camera then quickly pans out again as she spins counterclockwise, gripping a length of silky black ribbon in her left hand. As she spins a second time, the ribbon coils around her body, then flashes briefly as it takes the shape of her bodice. Her body jerks backwards for a second, acting like a puppet on a string, as black ribbons similar to the first snake around her upper arms and left thigh, forming her arm garters and leg garter. The camera goes for a bird’s eye view of the scene as she brings her forearms up over her face, panning in and making it appear as though she is rocketing skyward as her hairstyle shifts to rope-like black braids, her long black bilby ears sprouting at the same time. The movement stops at her collarbone area, showing that her Mew collar and locket are in place, then the camera pulls back again as she spins again while her black skirt pops out from the base of her bodice. Crossing her arms over her chest, she closes her eyes and falls backwards, sheets of sheer black material enveloping her forearms and lower calves as a rush of red rose petals blows across the screen. The material hardens around her legs and forms her boots, pale pink ribbons winding around the arches to make her spats. Similar pink ribbons, though much narrower, coil around her fingers and palms from beneath her sleeves, forming her gloves. Finally, she faces to the viewer’s left as the camera pans out again, raising her left arm over her head and allowing for a final set of black ribbons to tie around her wrist.

The camera flashes a few still pose images of Mew Licorice before going black, then zooming out to reveal it had been really close to her stomach. It spins around her as she thrusts her arms out to her sides, hands level to her shoulders, palms out, legs crossed, then settles on a frontal shot as the background becomes an image of a crucifix.

|Mew Physical Status| Her collar and garter are both made up of a bit of black ribbon, which holds a backing of pink lace in place. Her Mew locket is silver, with a rose emblem in the center. The bodice of her dress is sleeveless, starting just below her collarbone, with a heart-shaped top. Her black arm garters are about the same as most Mews’ with the exception of having pink lace trim rather than the more-accepted fuzz. A pair of black lace “aristocrat cuffs” cling to the distal ends of her forearms, flaring out by the time they reach her wrists and ending just before her fingers. Tight, pale pink gloves adorn her hands, disappearing beneath the cuffs. A black bow, complete with tulle, filament-like chains, and a brooch in the shape of the Saint Rose Crusader crest in the center, is tied to her left wrist, over the sleeve. The skirt portion flares outward like an overgrown black petunia with the front petal missing, being pinned to the base of the bodice. A pink skirt, similar in design, is fastened below the black one, with her black bilby tail just above it. Her garter is on her left thigh, fashioned out of the same materials as her collar. Her black, two-inch heeled lace-up boots go to the mid-calf and are covered with a pair of pink spats.

|Weapon| Licorice Lyre – (“Rikorisu Rieru”, typically pronounced as “Rikorieru”—Licorlyre) a black, heart-shaped instrument, with the pointed bottom end of the heart open. A pink crossbar is fastened across this opening. Ten silver filaments are stretched from this bar to the curved “top” of the heart. A black bow, similar to the one on Mew Licorice’s left wrist, is pinned between the humps that make up the curved part of the heart. The weapon is called forth from her cuff charm.

|Attack| Reborn Licorice Illusion! - Mew Licorice strums all ten strings on her lyre, then plucks out a soothing melody. The instrument emits a series of ultrasonic notes which cause the intended target (and occasionally others in the surrounding area) to be immersed in a dream world of their own fantasies. A second attack, Licorice Mirage, is simply a modified version of this attack, wherein the opponent is brought into a state similar to that of a person who has recently consumed a large amount of a psychedelic drug; that is, the opponent is put on a “trip” that may take up to two hours to overcome. The attacks can be warded off if the opponent plugs their ears with wax or a similar substance, as fingers will not cut it.

|Notes|
*There's a reason for her birthday being this day. Go look it up. :3

**Due to the fact that the animal she is infused with is no longer critically endangered, Mew Licorice is the absolute weakest of all of the Mews in existence (though. . . Zakuro seems to be feeling the effects herself). The fact that she can even transform into a Mew Mew is a miracle unto itself. She is only capable of taking down human opponents; if she were ever pit against a chimera animal (and if she didn’t run away first), she would have to be rescued or face being killed. There are other little bugs that plague her design due to her faulty DNA as well, but they won’t be listed here for fear of them being “spoilers” for her story. :3

*** Ah. . . I'm still in the process of animating this, so a detailed description will have to do for now. Hope that's allowed. ^^;

April twelfth (Google "April 12 licorice") is National Licorice Day. Fitting, hm? XD;;

Honeyberries (the edible berries of the honeysuckle plant) are dark blue. You could also use a candy name, as those can be dyed. XP

With her last name, you'd just use this site to help with the colors and stuff... not that many fan Mews follow that pattern, anyway. Licorice's last name used to be Hibiki (she also used to be my avatar character who changed into the sluttiest Mew costume possible... and was also crossed with a Riverine rabbit and an African golden cat). XP

With her weapon... I base those off of the character's name, as can be seen with Licorice's (though I stretched the pronunciation to fit; it's really pronounced "lai-er"). For Panpukin, I'd suggest a khene or a koudi, though they don't look all that, ah, fitting for her design. So for Blueberry, I can help you with that once you choose a final name for her maybe. :3

Ah, okay then. She's your character (I don't agree with Mew Ichigo's theme, either; Mew Zoey's theme seems to better fit her character, in my opinion). ^^

Ah, yeah... well, I said I was no good with personalities, eh? Hah hah, it's hard for me to come up with something like that when I'd first have to get a "feel" for her character... and I've never roleplayed as her in her current form before, nor have I gotten terribly far with her comic. ^^;;

You're very generous with her rating. Thank you very much. :3

I liked yours Minty but how is she so nice if shes so seperate from matters question

No bashing please! whee

Name:Kokoro Hikaru
Age: 14
Color: Brown and Orange, (Kuriume and Ki-aka)
Human Appearance: Short Brown Hair, Blue Eyes
Cafe Outfit: Brown Base with Orange Apron
Mew Appearance: Hair turns a lighter shade with a reddish shine, Eyes turn brown with Orange specks, Gloves are fingerless with ruffled ends (the cuff has Orange trim the fingers have orange stiching) Her outfit is a brown halter top that has two crossing orange strips across the back and narrows down to a strip by her stomach going bach into a mini all with orange trim. Her boots come to the middle of her calf and are brown with orange stiching. Her mark is at the base of her back and is in a butterfly shape, two curved lines that look like butterfly antenas with balls at the end making the top set of wings, two lives at opposite angles making the bottum wings and a set of arrows with no tails making the break in the wings.
Crush: She has a small playful crush on Ryou but nothing too bad...yet
Personality: Fairly happy go lucky and a dreamer she would do anyhting for a friend and even has fun in her more difficult relasionships. Loves to play ruff, but not sports. And she likes to write although denies any compliments. If you make fun of her she will play back and is always ready to go. Not perticularly popular and without many friends the Mew project was like a miracle to her. Her parents are always very busy and don't care what she does. She now stays at the cafe. On the battle feild is a bit of a different story. Although she somethimes treats it as a game she knows when to stop and has a bit of a competitive nature. Complete control over her attacks she rarely misses and even when it has left her hands she can control it. Because of her feirce love of her friends she would never hurt them even if it ment losing the fight.
Attack: Ribbon Anzu Shock. A lightning attack that comes from the cufflinks on her wrists. Ribbon Nemuru Death. A attack with her scythe only to be used in extream circumstances. Ribbon Anzu Protect(or light). A temporary force feild that drains her energy very quickly. Mew Aqua Healing. As a failed attempt to let deep blue appear in the worl she has large stores of Mew Aqua in her. Ribbon Blossom Reveal. Shows all hidden enimies and tells where they will go it they teleport.
Weapons: Anzu Cufflinks, Mew Aqua Rod, and Anzu Scythe.
Genetic Material: infused with a Female Smith's Blue Butterfly.

Song: Possibly the opening to FF10 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o2dx3VWbRd4 Possibly the synch version of everyheart.

Sorry she may seem a bit Mary-Sueish but is not It is just hard for me to write down personalities *not my thing* sweatdrop

Kitty_Cat_Chobits, do not take offense.
But you need to do a serious character overhaul.
First off, "Crystal" is not a food, unless you're counting "Crystal" wine and or/other liquor.
All the mew Mews beside Ichigo only have -one- weapon, that's like an instrument. So it'd be best fi you stuck to one that was well, an instrument.
Each Mew Mew has only one attack (except for Ichigo).
ours has three. The first and second are incredibly mary-sueish.
Her appearance also does not follow the usual pattern. You should pick a color and use the member of it's families (Say you pick blue; you can also use skyblue, navy, indigo, etc.), or a color and a neautral (white, black, gray). Your character has blonde hair and blue eyes. That may pass in her human form, but not her Mew form.

Your character, with the proper revisions, could be amazing, and not a mary-sue. =3