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Mistress Izaru

PostPosted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 7:44 pm


I know it needs work because I have alittle writers block.And I couldn't really think of a title either.




Running in the dark without thinking
Looking for a way out but never seem
To find it.
Seeking for a light to shine upon you but
it seems to slip away from you whenever
you get near it.
Realizing the fate you have come upon to yourself
See all the right chances to change go by and
Dreaming of the perfect moment that will
never come.
And when you finally reach it you seem to die away
from the life you always wanted and the never ending
void in your heart that burns you from the inside.
Live the life you want and not the life you don't
want to have.


~By Inu_Sakura_89~
PostPosted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 4:15 pm


It is great I really think. I think the flow of the veres it works really well it gave me the feeling of being traped in a labrinth(sp) but ya lol really good

AlaskaYoung


Mistress Izaru

PostPosted: Thu Mar 15, 2007 11:38 am


Thank You Very Much whee
PostPosted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 8:33 am


That was good, I particularly enjoy the part about the light. However I'm not much of a poet so I don't know how valid my opinion is.

Aximos


Mistress Izaru

PostPosted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 8:26 pm


Its okay your opinion was great thank you very much
PostPosted: Fri Mar 23, 2007 7:53 pm


It was beautiful, seriously great poem. You did very well on it.

xxbroken_heart_princexX


Mistress Izaru

PostPosted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 7:41 pm


Thank You your opinion is appriciated
PostPosted: Sat Aug 11, 2007 5:16 am



Well..I know my word isn't much to anybody, but reading what U posted...I....
Thank you is all I can really say, and of course that good job stuff to, but I must say...How did U ever come up with such....what's the word i'm looking for..." Masterful combinations " arrow

Really great job, and I hope U keep it up!

-Shade


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