Well I have a new dream avatar, that will take quite awhile to reach. But I made a slightly similar drawing to it. I kinda messed up the feet, and I didn't bother on drawing hands so I took the easy way and made the sleeves long.
There is also a poem I wrote included in the image. Just minor venting in my poem. So enjoy!
Posted: Mon Mar 12, 2007 4:38 pm
I love it heres one of my poems/songs
Cold
Standing in the distance still waiting a memory sinking into my skin of a time when I didnt feel so hopeless of a time when you would come to rescue me from myself
And now your awake when I'm still fast asleep And I still dream of the good times When this pain didnt creep up on me I'm lost without you
And now I feel so cold without a voice without a soul And in my final hour I will call one last time out to you
Pretending to be together when I really am so broken tears hidden behind a smile so fake that it seems real pretending every second a lie that never fades still wishing that it were the truth
And now your awake when I'm still fast asleep And I still dream of the good times When this pain didnt creep up on me I'm lost without you
And now I feel so cold without a voice without a soul and in my final hour I will call one last time out to you
done now
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Posted: Mon Mar 12, 2007 4:44 pm
Those are both awesome! @mellee: I can hear a tune with your poem; it flows very well! You should write more/post more poems! @rockr: That's so pretty! I really wish I could write songs... The only thing I can write is poetry, but I can't really find a tune that matches any of them, because I thought more along the lines of poetry. XD
One of my poems:
Reminiscence
How I loved the recent days When I was filled with life and cheer. All those times were many ways Of healing me from early year
But O the blissful time now past That I believed would last so long Was, I guess, not meant to last, More proof that I was very wrong.
You told the truth of how you felt, I’m glad; just thought I’d let you know. No matter how the cards are dealt, We’ll still be friends, right? I hope so.
I wrote that some time in Freshman year in response to some things that occurred then. XD I have about eight other poems. Lol
Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 8:59 am
Lordy those poems I could just....wow. Very well written.
I really want to start writing songs. But it doesn't seem to work for me. We should make a seperate topic just for poems.
*goes to the site* Those are good! I can definitely hear a rhythm to the lyrics. If that makes any sense. XD I keep trying to write song lyrics, but they always sound more like poetry than an actual song. ><