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Sasaki-san

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Posted: Wed Mar 07, 2007 3:33 pm

This is my shortest poem, only four lines. Add something if you want but please no nonsense if it doesn't follow the flow. Oh, and no stealing it.

Life can be wonderful
Life can be whole
Life can be sad…
Without you it truly is.

Posted: Fri Mar 09, 2007 10:42 am

Sasaki-san

This is my shortest poem, only four lines. Add something if you want but please no nonsense if it doesn't follow the flow. Oh, and no stealing it.

Life can be wonderful
Life can be whole
Life can be sad…
Without you it truly is.

Life is now not as beautful as it once was
Life is now only as my tears can show
Speak to me and tell why you are gone
I thought I saw you once but it wasn't you
They looked like you and spoke like you
So now I wonder was it really you?

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Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 11:50 am

ShuOokami

Sasaki-san

This is my shortest poem, only four lines. Add something if you want but please no nonsense if it doesn't follow the flow. Oh, and no stealing it.

Life can be wonderful
Life can be whole
Life can be sad…
Without you it truly is.

Life is now not as beautful as it once was
Life is now only as my tears can show
Speak to me and tell why you are gone
I thought I saw you once but it wasn't you
They looked like you and spoke like you
So now I wonder was it really you?

Shadow of the past
repeating all I thought I know
Shadows falling backwards in my mind
moveing fast around what I thought I know
My Shadow moves slow
and I wish we'd move even slowwer
So now I wonder was it really you?

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