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 Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 2:01 pm
so here is one of my poems, I hoep you guys lke it at least a lil
Despare the dark light which consumes us
Creeping, Crawling it takes over
Can we escape, are we fated to live
In this existence of nothingness
The air thickens taking away our breath
We lose ourselves in a world of fantasy
Always drawn out by reality
The agony of escaping to a world of dreams
And being ripped out by a wretched existense that is life
Imagination, the key to our freedom
The feeling of being held, in a loves embrace
Complete serenity that can never exist
constantly we are drawn back
To this Dispare the dark light consuming us
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Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 5:43 pm
I really liked it! Dark poems about love are my favorite, despite the fact they tend to be very depressing. I might write something for the heck of it even though I hate my writing. XD
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Shizuki Kisuke Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 8:03 pm
I actually wrote that at random I have no clue why, I may put up some more, but yea its not my usual thing to do
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Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 10:41 pm
That's depressing, but very good!
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Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 10:45 pm
lol you should read my poem about lonliness lol
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