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 Posted: Wed Feb 28, 2007 10:15 pm
Just submit a poem (if you have one) that you think is good
Rules: If you critisize, make it seem nice.
Don't copy other people's poems. (you never know)
Here is a poem that I came up with last month ^^
My heart is like falling snow
Quiet and peaceful yet sad
The only time it's not snowing
Is when you're right here with me
As I hold you in my arms
As you snuggle in my warmth
Things just seem to be
Alot more joyfull
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Posted: Wed Feb 28, 2007 10:24 pm
I've never been quite happy with the ending, but....
sight
what do you do
when someone can't see
their sight never going through
never realizing they have the key
your soul set to crumble
right before their eyes
you doubt they even hear the rumble
as the first pieces fall from the skies
what do you do
when all you want is to flee
but your heart belongs to
the one that can't see
you feel yourself start to tumble
wondering if you were wise
to place your heart in their hands to fumble
wondering if they will even hear your cries
what do you do
when someone can't see
if only they could somehow view
what would be the fee
your soul just some rubble
but somehow it still tries
to get past being humble
and to once again rise
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