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im thinking about either turning this into a series of shot stories or a rp. I would like some feed back, on if you think it would make a good one for either.

Primal corruption
Some were in the under net something very powerful slept. An old piece of data built from one of the early sci lab experiments. The scientists that made the net, saw the danger in the other programs made to protect and control the net. Alpha, the cyber beasts, and other unnamed experiments.
A few of the scientists saw a problem with these programs.
They foresaw the danger in them, and wanted to create a counter measure. Something to make average navis into a force that could stand against them. They created what was codenamed primal data. Once this was administered to a navi, its speed and strength would more than triple. The navi would gain more animal like qualities. Shape teeth, claws, horns, thicker armor, and wings in some cases. Only one in a thousand navis could accept the primal data. Any others would suffer slow and extremely pain full deletion. The project was considered a failure and scraped.
The data was thought to have been deleted completely, but one of the surviving test subjects escaped to the under net. The navi was thought to have been deleted by under navis. But fate intervened. The primal data in the navis core corrupted. It made the navi go berserk, and attack any other navi it saw. It never full killed a navi though. It made them weak enough to infect with the bugged primal data. Some did, and some didn’t accept the data. Those that didn’t were deleted, and those that did were drove to infect more. This caused chaos in the under net.
It was a war to keep from being infected with the primal data. Under navis got desperate and did something no one thought they would. They called the net police for help. Both wanted to rid the net of the primal data. It was a threat and would threaten to destroy the net.
The battles that raged were catastrophic for the uncorrupted. Not only was there enemy stronger and faster than them, but with each of there allies that had fallen they either had to watch them suffer from rejecting the data, or see them turn on them and attack. Eventually the navis infected with the primal data were pushed back, and locked in a area of the under net, full of viruses so strong that even the highest level net opps and most powerful of under navis wouldn’t dare to go. And a barrier was erected to keep any one from getting in or out. The problem was contained, and the primal data and those infected became dormant. Waiting inside that barrier till there time would come to rise again.
But fate would continue to play cruel jokes on the net. Some how the primal data changed again. It made its self a carrier. Some one with no idea that they were infected, and couldn’t activate the data on their own. Now this person can spread the data, when in battle. A odd trait is that when close enough to another in battle. It can transmute that date to the other. This strain is active and works just like the primal data the caused the catastrophe in the under net. The navi changes, and goes berserk. And the cycle repeats once again. Only this time its in the regular net. Were the weaker navis live and play.

good point, ill fix that.