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Posted: Wed Feb 21, 2007 6:38 pm
This will continue the story started in Vignette's, with edits of course ^>^ Please add any comments you might have.
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Posted: Wed Feb 21, 2007 6:45 pm
Draped in golden embroidered cloth, like the hint of autumn leaves, she stood above the crowd of followers on a platform, arms spread out towards heaven as she took a step toward the edge. The people watched eagerly, waiting for something, though for what was unclear. From behind the crowd watched the royal family, faces expressionless. She seemed to almost hesitate at the edge of the platform, before closing her eyes and stepping off.
For several agonizing moments she simply fell, and the people gasped as they moved forward as if to catch her. Then she was enveloped in bright light, and where the woman had been, a beautiful golden hawk now flew over the spectators’ heads. The people cheered, and the Royal family came to the edge of the high platform and watched as the golden hawk banked several times over the roaring crowd before returning to the platform. And surrounded by the royal family, she morphed once more, looking drained from the trial.
The crowd continued to cheer as Arial was led away her room to rest. She had proven herself worthy of the king and would be married to him within the month. The royal family was sober but relieved as they approached her one at a time, placing a kiss on her brow before making their exit. The king was last to leave, resting his forehead against her own before allowing her to sleep. They had a wedding to plan for, after all. ---- "The Darkness shall rise and a golden hawk who flies shall bear the king's Heir, lost nations reunite under the Golden flag..." The Historian muttered beneath his breath as he kept pace with his king, who seemed deeply engrossed with other matters, as he had been for sometime.
"Your Majesty, Lady Arial...you are sure she is the hawk they speak of?" Head Chancellor Manti timidly interjected into his master's thoughts. He had been doubtful of this union from the beginning, though he had never explained why.
The king simply glanced at Manti, which quieted the man once more. The king was in one of his moods, and of course he was sure that Arial was the one. They had tested over one thousand women, and Arial was the first to become the golden hawk. Many simply fallen into the waiting arms of the crowd below, or became less graceful creatures, and many of these lacked the ability to morph back. Lady Arial had always been the king’s favorite, quiet and graceful with intoxicating golden eyes; he had been very pleased by this turn of events and would have no councilor try to convince him otherwise.
The hall sparkled in jewel tones as the tall Crystal windows let in golden sunlight, rich tapestries forming the walls to the kings right while the windows stood majestically to his left. Heading towards the gardens his men had intercepted him with their seperate worries, worries he had heard many times before, ever since the trial.
Ahead he saw his mother, an older but graceful woman of cool, serene features. She had said nothing to his choice of brides, though she had seemed slightly surprised that Arial had been chosen by the Creator as her only son's bride. She had been openly supporting some of the other ladies, those with temperaments like unto herself.
The King bowed slightly to his mother, kissing her hand in greeting and planning on simply passing by, but her hand on his arm stopped him. The king watched his mother curiously, his green eyes sparkling and alive, so unlike his mother’s chilly blue orbs. His eyebrow cocked silently, asking what it was she required. As if on a secret cue, his men dismissed themselves and he stood beside his mother as she gazed out the window. He thought for several moments that he might have to initiate the conversation, but finally the woman spoke voice that was clipped and proper, even with her own son.
"Your bride to be, she is a beautiful creature, however I do have concerns about her temperament..." Her words trailed off, though she did not glance at her son. She was obviously waiting for him to take the bait, and she wouldn't be disappointed.
"Has she done something that you disapprove of mother?" His voice and face were frowning. He had always showed his emotions, like his father before him.
The old queen simply shook her head, long slender curls falling gracefully down her slim back. "It is not what she has done my son, but the way she is. Far too timid, the people would walk all over her. She may have the form of a golden hawk, but she acts like more of a chick than the adult she is. I simply fear that she will find being your queen an uncomfortable occupation. I simply seek to look out for the welfare of my King and his Kingdom."
The young king blinked, and felt a wave of relief wash over him. So Arial had not done anything after all. In truth he did not mind her quietness, even if his mother interpreted it as timidness. Arial was far from shy, she simply did not display her full authority unless absolutely necessary. He quietly reassured his mother that Arial would make a very fine queen. All of the ladies chosen had had queen potential. He kissed his mother’s hand again as he made his exit, not seeing his mother watch him leave before turning her back to him, face colder than before. ---- Arial sat amongst the trees wearing long robes of her usual silver embroidered green, the design of feathers gracing the hem and sleeves, long golden-brown hair tied back from her face with a thin green ribbon, golden eyes studying the book before her. Her guards watched discreetly, protecting the future queen without seeming to. She knew they were there, but managed to ignore them.
It had been a week since the trial, and she tried not to think about what all of this meant. She had come to the castle after meeting the young prince Davam, and had witnessed his crowning. There had been so many beautiful, talented women chosen that she doubted her quietness would have won over the king. She was surprised to discover that in the brief time before the trials started she had somehow caught his eye and his favor. It was at that moment that she hoped beyond hope to be a Golden hawk.
She had known from the day that she was born that she could shape change, though it was not until that moment of trial that she knew her form. The golden hawk was a rare and difficult form to keep, and flying was a talent that humans normally did not have naturally. She supposed her years of dancing had paid off in that brief ability.
Though she had slept for three days afterward, it was worth it. The beauties were all gone, and she had a relative moment of peace here and there between dress fittings and presentations of wedding gifts that were necessary for her to attend to. She could not remember a time when she had been happier. She had the love of her king, her family was pleased with her, for once, and she had felt her gifts grow stronger since the trial.
She smiled and closed her book, looking up into the bright blue sky and feeling the sun on her face. Yes almost everyone was pleased with this outcome...everyone except the old queen. The thought of her brought Arial back to her surroundings, but she was still alone.
Something about the Old queen gave Arial chills, even after the Trial when the woman had kissed her forehead just as the young princesses had. She still felt uneasy around the woman, and the closer it got to the wedding the worse the feeling became. She was quiet now around the old queen, almost meek, which was unusual for the normally brave and confidant Arial. She never said anything to Davam about his mother. What could she say that would not seem rude or childish?
She stood from her seat on the ground, discreetly checking her dress for stains or dirt. The advantage of green being that it showed no grass stains. Satisfied that she had not made a mess of herself, she headed back into the castle. She carefully handed the book to a servant waiting at the door and went in search for her beloved. Though she felt someone watching her, she could see no one as she glanced around. She tried to ignore the sensation, as she had the little odd things about her life since coming to the castle. --- The old queen watched her future daughter-in-law from a balcony, eyes cold as ever, until she disappeared down a secret corridor. The narrow stairway there wound upward and upward into utter darkness, though the old queen needed no light to know her exact location. She arrived at a secret room that even her son knew nothing about; it was on no maps of the castle, and so was unlikely to be discovered. She made her way to a stone basin in which a pool of still water sat, blue eyes glancing at a candle nearby. It lit, as did the others around the room, suddenly illuminating it.
She approached the pool again and slipped something from her pocket: a single lock of golden-brown hair which she held within her hand as she blew gently upon the pool of water. Like a ripple from a thrown pebble the water shifted, becoming a mirror in which Arial was shown. She was obviously older and heavy with child. The old queen watched as this younger woman spoke to her husband, obviously about the baby and even more obviously in love.
The old queen sneered, and as if with a thought the image changed to a handsome young man, a near spitting image of his father but with his mother’s golden eyes. She saw him battling something cloaked in shadow, a woman though the face was unseen.
She watched intently as the young man defeated his foe and the woman was revealed, and with cold blue eyes the old queen looked upon her own countenance, as ageless as she now appeared though silver streaks showed within her strands of black hair.
She turned away from the mirror and banished the image of herself beaten. She would not be defeated by a whelp because of some prophesy. It had to be stopped, but how? She replaced the lock of hair in her pocket and resumed her watching of the future queen. She would find a way. She was determined now.
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Posted: Thu Feb 22, 2007 6:03 pm
*Two years before*
Arial Bismark was the third daughter of five, unremarkable compared to her older and younger siblings. The perfect example of a middle child, unnoticed and a peacemaker. Her hair was long and golden brown, her features pretty but not outstanding, the only truly remarkable feature she carried were her golden eyes, the same eyes her mother carried, the one thing that caused her to stand apart.
"Miss Arial, your mother desires your presence for dinner, she says that you are not allowed to stay absent from your meals any longer." The plump head maid looked faintly cross at the dreamer beside the window her crosstitch half forgotten on her lap.
The girl blushed and nodded putting away the half finished hankerchief and slipping from the window with surprising grace, all of the sisters had that grace even the slightly awkward Arial. She meekly followed the maid to the main dining room where her parents and sisters waited. The two eldest smirked knowing that the dreamer was bound to get in trouble tonight, meaning entertainment for them. The younger two watched their siblings eagerly wishing to follow in the oldest girls footsteps.
The only one who even seemed remotely pleased to see Arial was her golden eyed mother, the woman's black hair seeming to glow in the candlelight she gave a gentle nod to her middle daughter as she found a seat between the two sets of sisters.
All of the girls were spectacular beauties of varying shades, from golden tan to pearl white, compared to her four sisters Arial was rather plain with her gentle peachy coloring and dusting of freckles across her nose. She eyed her swanlike eldest sister Arla, the only married of the group.
Her hair of flaming red, like their fathers had been curled back into quite an impressive quaff. Arla's husband Edmund sat across from his wife, as handsome and cold as she was selfish, a good match in Arial's young mind though she said nothing of it.
The second oldest Ana, pale as her twin was dark made coy eyes at her own betrothed, a man to rival Edmund in looks. Though he was warmer in temperment the quiet Daniel was someone that Arial could actually get along with when the rest of her family was being cruel. He even gave her a brief smile as she sat before returning his full attention to the golden angel across from him.
The two youngest, also twins were nearly identical with black hair and green eyes, the only seeming difference between them was that one ate with her left hand while the other ate with her right, like a mirror image. They glanced at Arial with distain, they did not like her, taking Arla's example on how to treat the middle sister.
Arie and Ashli, were going to be lovely creatures on the outside at least they would get good matches their father was already looking at options though the young twins were still two years too young for such things.
Arial contemplated all of this before she realized that no one was speaking, looking up she saw that Edmund had apparently asked her a question and the rest of the table had stopped to listen to her answer. She felt her cheeks grow warm as she meekly asked for him to repeat the question.
The cold man looked highly amused at her inattention and repeated the question with a smirk.
"I assume you are planning on going to the town dance next month, will you be attending with a beau?" His eyebrow arched those cold eyes mocking as if daring her to admit something everyone else knew.
Arial sat up straighter golden eyes nearly burning into Edmund's, for a moment he almost considered looking away but knew that would show that he had some fear of his sister in law, which would be completely shameful. She glanced quickly at those at the table, still no one had moved not ashamed in watching her blatantly.
"I will not be going to the dance with anyone, as I have no one who will escort me, I had in fact considered not going at all. That is what you wanted to hear isn't it dear brother?" The last endearment was far from endearing as she suddenly pictured his mouth puckering as if from a sour lemon and sticking like that for eternity.
Her father cleared his throat with a frown, flaming red hair tinging on gray now and in a careful combed back style, as was expected of any lord of some station.
"Nonesense Arial, you will go to this dance, I'm sure cousin Edgar would be very willing to escort you, write him tonight about the issue." That said he returned to dinner and everyone else followed cue, there was nothing left to discuss on the matter.
Arial nearly winced at the name of 'cousin Edgar' the man was no blood relation, but an old friend from her father's hunting days. Edgar was old enough to be her father and he was always far too eager to make her aquaintance every time they were together in a room. She knew she could not argue with her father about this subject and also knew that Edgar would be escorting her to the dance, she just hoped he kept his hands to himself this time.
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Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 7:26 am
**gammar natzi**
Pretty good otherwise!
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Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 7:52 am
yeah i'm actually adding the story to word and editing it there. I'm also posting the story on Deviant art.
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 11:12 pm
MersSong **gammar natzi** Pretty good otherwise! i just realized what this said...ironic?
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Posted: Sun Apr 08, 2007 4:27 pm
lmao....this is what happens when I type too fast...
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Posted: Sun Apr 08, 2007 4:35 pm
we all suffer that particular plague...i probably should update this soon...
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