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 Posted: Sun Feb 18, 2007 6:23 pm
here you can post poetry that you have written or someone else's poem that you admire. just make sure if you post somone else's that you give them credit
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Posted: Mon Feb 19, 2007 7:21 am
I love poetry. ^^ Heres one from someone else.
Lost I am
Without you to share my world
You were the purest expression in imagery
My reality has become unfurled
Lost you are
In the catacombs of your own mind
The memories of regret imprison you
Stop searching for all things unkind
Lost we are
When we’re always surrounded by lies
Peers preaching unhonesty on every corner
Someday it’ll be worth all our tries
Lost forever
Until we all change the way we act
There is no honor in living this way
Let’s unite and end these fact
William T. Lane
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Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 5:38 pm
I love poetry as well. I like making them more than reading them. Here's some of my work:
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Fall With Me
One night,
When I was sleeping,
I dreamed that I was falling,
Whether I was falling up or down,
Was a mystery in itself,
I could not feel the rush of wind,
That hits you when you fall,
I could not feel the pull of gravity,
That crushes you as you stall,
I certainly could not feel the adrenaline,
That makes you soar,
I certainly could not look down,
Afraid that I’d just floor,
One night,
When I was sleeping,
I dreamed that I was falling,
I dreamed of hands, arms, bodies,
A face,
I dreamed of desires, lusts, hunger,
A craving,
I dreamed of foxes, rabbits, grass,
A chase,
One night,
When I was sleeping,
I dreamed that I was falling,
And when I woke up,
I asked my lady love,
“Is there such a thing as falling up?”
She answered me, “No.”
So we all fell down.
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I actually have this published on fictionpress so it is copyrighted. ^^
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Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 5:29 pm
Indeed, I like writeing poetry but I'm often reluctent to share it randomly online. Nice poem Yuki.
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Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 10:15 pm
lol same here. i just decided to be brave. and i dont really like this poem. i only like the last stanza and how it ends. ^^:
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Posted: Tue Feb 27, 2007 1:57 pm
Immune
I've been beat
But i don't feel it
There is light
But i don't see it
People whisper
I don't hear it
People jest
I ignore them
I'm not connected to all the rest
I drift in my own realm
A separate existence from everyone else
A thin tie between the two, I roam limbo
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Posted: Tue Feb 27, 2007 4:29 pm
Ha, that's something I can easily connect to. ^^
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Posted: Tue Feb 27, 2007 7:54 pm
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Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 8:41 pm
Nature did not have a plan,
When it created the pear-head man.
He had one friend,
Who was made of bread.
The birdies ate him,
So now he's dead.
-Roman Dirge
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Posted: Fri Apr 20, 2007 6:47 pm
'Of all the words we think and say,
none are worse then the words,
"It might of been",
When all that we had to do was pray,
and hope our thoughts,
are there to stay.'
-Yuki
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Beware of Falling Objects Crew
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Posted: Fri Apr 20, 2007 8:16 pm
ok something i wrote a little while ago:
how is this the end?
why must it all just stop
for what we've broken, we cannot mend
the blood we've spilled, we cant mop up
Our killings at times make everything worse
our lives, our love, gone without a word
our blood that's spilt, every tear our curse
all our lives, gone without a word
no whisper, no sound
just lifeless souls
laying there on the cold hard ground
got no love, no one to hold
The end at last
no glory to show
brought down by the past
no future to hold
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Posted: Fri Apr 20, 2007 8:19 pm
Something i wrote for english a few months ago:
Brutality and war
Knowledge just makes it harder
Bombs, weapons, they hurt us all
Wealthy country of thy Martyr
Has wealth and knowledge made it worse?
Have they even helped us at all?
Chemical weapons and bombs are truly our curse
Knowledge and wealth make us fall
Our troops lack education
To focused on the bombs
Wasting all our money on
Something that shall never be resolved
This war is never ending
Wasting money on chemical weapons and bombs
How is this knowledge helping?
Brutality is now our job
Bombs and chemical weapons
Technology in the war
This technology isn’t helping
Save yourself before there’s more
Brutality and war
Knowledge just makes it harder
Bombs, weapons, they hurt us all
Wealthy country of thy Martyr
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Beware of Falling Objects Crew
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Beware of Falling Objects Crew
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Posted: Fri Apr 20, 2007 8:21 pm
somethin else i wrote:
Her heart makes hell look like winter
Her soul has been gone for years
In the cold she does not shiver
Her eyes, never filled with tears
She walks the streets in black and gray
No color in her life
In the empty fields she always lay
Staring at the cold night sky
No one knows her
She goes without a name
Everybody sees her
But none see her the same
Most of them see her
As the cold-hearted one that she may be
But others see her
As someone who can truly see
See all the sadness in the world
See all of the depression
And take it upon herself
To walk the world in no direction
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Posted: Thu Apr 26, 2007 10:25 am
[>
Can we post songs?
'Cos I wrote a new one recently,
and I keep wanting to show someone =]
x
/Dance]
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