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 Posted: Sun Feb 18, 2007 2:41 pm
Through the mourning dreary haze,
The ghoulish eyes of night's eve await.
Her catlike stare is a nightmarish creation,
And her grin is cold as bloodied steel.
What brings this maiden out from yonder?
What despairing souls beckon her name?
The lost and the empty, bereft of feeling,
Looking for a way around life’s bane.
Following her like ignorant fools,
Beckoning to her every whim.
Their lives are those of freaks of nature,
Without any thought to loss or gain.
The future weeps for you, my pet,
As any one with Sight can see.
You lost yourself without a thought,
Now you’ll pay the price. And merrily.
erm...please comment?
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Posted: Mon Feb 19, 2007 12:09 pm
that is a very nice poem. it is very lovely.
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Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 5:20 pm
^^; I'm not good at reading poems and stufflez... but that sorta confuzed me.. sweatdrop
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Posted: Wed Feb 21, 2007 2:15 pm
Kyweee~ It's so pretty ^>^
just kinda confuzlin
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Lazuri-Hikari Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Feb 22, 2007 4:40 pm
uwah!! sorreh that it's confusing...><
meant for it to be about a certain person...
And thankies! ^^
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Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2007 2:53 pm
Ohhhhhh...so this is the poem you PMed me about...
Anyways...
It's a little confusing, as Lazi said, but it's really good. Just...I don't think using the term "freaks of nature" is a good idea. The rest of the poem sounds so poetic and beautiful and wise and all and then you read "freaks of nature" and it just sticks out. Okay, I'm gonna stop rambling now.
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