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MersSong

PostPosted: Mon Feb 12, 2007 1:43 pm


VERY WIP, but I love feedback while I'm working.

Those of you who've known me a while realize that from time to time I like to write, and I'll start a project. Right now I'm putting the framework down for a new one, and I work best bouncing ideas off of people.

The premise of the tale is a pirate ship, the Flying Amethyst. It takes place in a fantasy world, which I'm still building. The world is heavily based in the Golden Age of Sail, aka from about 1650-1825. I'm mixing things as I see fit (or what fun would it be?).

This will be an ongoing thread, and I'll post in the subject the lastest update.

Index:
Page 1: You are Here
Page 2: Chapters Available
Page 3: Dramatis Personae
Page 4: Articles
Page 5: Flying Amethyst Specs
Page 6: reserve
Page 7: reserve
Page 8: reserve
PostPosted: Mon Feb 12, 2007 1:48 pm


Chapters will be posted on my MySpace Account. Which is good, because it saves space in here. smile I'll always change the links on this page when I've updated on MySpace.

Please note: the lower the draft number, the more rough it is.

Available Now:
Prologue (Draft 1)

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MersSong

PostPosted: Mon Feb 12, 2007 1:52 pm


Dramatis Personae, or, List of Characters

In alphabetical order. If no name is listed with a description, that means I'm still naming them. These are listed last. This list will grow over time.


Amelie de Isigney
Annette: prostitute in Port Fly
"Balzarine" Jaxon: sailor aboard the Flying Amethyst
Bellona (Bell): Master Gunner of the Flying Amethyst
Dylan Romney: Captain of the Flying Amethyst, brother of Grace Romney
Eustace: Sailor of the Flying Amethyst, something of a mystic
Gaddali (Gad): Sailor of the Flying Amethyst
Grace Romney: Quartermaster of the Flying Amethyst, sister of Dylan Romney
Ignatius: Surgeon of the Flying Amethyst
Mother Yackle: tavern keeper and fortune teller in Port Fly
Philips: Carpenter of the Flying Amethyst
Pieter: Sailor of the Flying Amethyst
Teodosio (Teo): Sailor of the Flying Amethyst
Tiernan: Sailing Master of the Flying Amethyst (second mate)
Wylie: Boatswain of the Flying Amethyst (third mate)
Cook of the Flying Amethyst
Cabin Boy of the Flying Amethyst
PostPosted: Mon Feb 12, 2007 1:55 pm


Articles of Agreement are a pirate ship's constitution. Every pirate aboard the ship has to sign them, and they are agreed on jointly. (Yes, pirates practice democracy). The Articles of the Amethyst are heavily based on those used by Bartholomew Roberts (Black Bart), who is prob'ly the most sucessful pirate ever (he captured over 400 ships).

Articles of Agreement


I. Every man has a vote in affairs of moment; has equal title to the fresh provisions, or strong liquors, at any time seized, and may use them at pleasure, unless a scarcity makes it necessary, for the good of all, to vote a retrenchment.

II. Every man to be called fairly in turn, by list, on board of prizes because they were on these occasions allowed a shift of clothes: but if they defrauded the company to the value of a dollar in plate, jewels, or money, marooning was their punishment.

III. If any gold, jewels, silver, ect. be found on board of any prize or prizes to the value of a Piece of Eight, and the finder do not deliver it to the Quartermaster in the space of 24 hours he shall suffer what punishment the Captain and the majority of the company shall think fit.

IV. The Captain and Quartermaster to receive two shares of a prize: the Master, Boatswain, and Gunner, one share and a half, and other officers one and quarter.

V. If any man shall lose a joint in time of an engagement, shall have 400 Pieces of Eight; if a limb, 800.

VI. To keep their piece, pistols, and cutlass clean and fit for service.

VII. To desert the ship or their quarters in battle, was punished with death or marooning.

VIII. No striking one another on board, but every man's quarrels to be ended on shore, at sword and pistol.

IX. No person to game at cards or dice for money.

X. The musicians to have rest on the Sabbath Day, but the other six days and nights, none without special favor.

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