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SierraSevenFour

PostPosted: Mon Feb 12, 2007 2:23 am


Well might as well post it... since everyone else is.... This is a poem i wrote a while ago....

These eyes shadow an eternity of sadness,
some say deppression, others say madness,
You were my remedy, for a poison, so vile,
now the pain of your absence, feels like bile.

The Rain, The Rain, it keeps me sane,
my only cure, only numbs the pain,
carving down, taking the blame,
starting to feel, its all the same.

So now shes gone, withought a trace,
leaving noting, except the scare in place,
running down the lines of my heart,
slowly eroding, falling apart.

Its not the first, i hope not the last,
but nothing has ever worked in the past.
If only i knew, what lies ahead,
I have a feeling, my heart will stop dead.

These eyes shadow, a lonley past,
to see them is rare, why do they contrast?
they want to rest, to rest in peace,
My soul is dying, beginning to cease.
PostPosted: Mon Feb 12, 2007 2:33 am


Pretty, and so begins the emo poetry....no but seriously thats well, not nice, but not bad you know. like i like it but its depressing some what!

Laura_Ingalls


SierraSevenFour

PostPosted: Mon Feb 12, 2007 3:05 am


Yeah well we all know it was coming xp
But yes this poem was written when i was severly deppressed, All over that one girl. But that is past now, and this emo poem shall remain my only emo poem.... now I write love poems xd
PostPosted: Tue Feb 13, 2007 2:01 am


just in time for valentine's day!

Laura_Ingalls


iicaptain

PostPosted: Thu Feb 15, 2007 12:27 pm


Mmmm, I can't write poetry, so anything and everything that somebody else composes is BRILLIANT.

nice work. Emo poetry. Delectable. I am going to conveniently leave out that it MUST DIE.
PostPosted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 2:49 pm


i like it
i write peoms to and almost all of them are depressing but i rarley let people see them.......i might as well post one.....maybe
anyway its awsome ^^

Helvetti Vanki


Laura_Ingalls

PostPosted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 1:11 am


God damn i dont' remember posting them yet i know i did.

Man my memory sucks.
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