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DeviousCrimsonWitch

PostPosted: Sun Feb 11, 2007 8:50 pm


sweatdrop This may be a little intense for a first work but until I can get my short story, I figured this would show a little of what I can do... -nervous-

Look at you now,
still unaware that I see through this trick.
I fear that drowning in your hypocrisy,
is making this sick.
Do you really think I don't know what it is,
that goes on in your head?
Do you think I don't question your intentions,
while I lie awake in bed?
You lied to me and told me that you were doing this for me,
but after stepping back and taking a look, I finally see.
God I wanted so badly,
to believe in what you were..
Why in gods name do I have to
find out all this from her?!
Well you've broken me into pieces,
is that what you were waiting for?
Congrads I was so ignorant,
to what you had in store
You've successfully shattered my spirit,
with a smile on your face.
My god, Id have to admit,
it's never been done with such grace!
I don't know if there'll be a happy ending,
what that's not what you expected me to say?
We'll honey, my name's not Snow White...
and I know you won't save my day..
Well you can preach and praise yourself,
while I walk out that damn door.
But in your heart,
I hope you know...
I know who this was for....

Again, sorry
PostPosted: Tue Feb 13, 2007 1:29 pm


The poem had good feeling though the scheme seemed a bit off itself.

Nice first post, and welcome to the guild.

Ame Kuro


DeviousCrimsonWitch

PostPosted: Tue Feb 13, 2007 2:29 pm


sweatdrop Thank you, I'm not too sure where I wanted to go with this, but I kinda like it
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