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Posted: Sun Feb 11, 2007 12:17 am
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Posted: Thu Feb 15, 2007 12:24 pm
Hm... I'm thinking of doing something to do with ghosts, and blood... and guns. Like, banishing rifles and stuff. Something with a lot of noise.
TO ONOMATOPOEIA!
But srsly, 2 characters. 1's a stereotypical banisher - tall, dark, mysterious, muscled, slight tan... smokes, drinks and swears, is secretly severely depressed.
The other is a bumbling wreck, because he saw his girlfriend murdered... brutally... and is drenched in her blood. He gets told to shut up a lot. He's jumpy, nervous, and continuously talks to himself. Also, he thinks that a giant monkey is out to get him.
Discuss.
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Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 4:44 pm
A giant monkey? suits me.
I'm thinking of having a Shcitzophrenic in a mental hospital. She raves on about a chip in the back of her neck and keeps trying to get it out. she raves on about demons or something that visit her at night and read up on the chip, or aliens (are they considered supernatural? or just sci-fi? hmm wil have to ask on that one.) Then eventually she gets abducted (if aleins) or taken into hell (if demons) or turned into a vampire (if vampires). Story will be ehr escape from what is real and what is not.l should be too hard as i already know what it feels like so this shoudl be fun!
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Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 5:55 pm
... that sounds like House.
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Posted: Mon Feb 19, 2007 1:29 am
Does too, cept i didnt' get my idea from there. I got it from the blurb of a book for the chip in the neck, cept i'm thinking that i plant ideas in her mind not her neck, a metaphorical sense to prove her madness. yeah. ninja
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Posted: Mon Feb 19, 2007 11:21 pm
Your story sounds somewhat like supernatural, Loz
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Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 12:08 pm
Aye, but now it doesn't have to be about the supernatural, so i'm gonna change the thing into a murderer!
*thrust*
But that was just an idea for the supernatural theme.
Now that we don't have to... I was thinking of doing something that is kind of similar to russia...
So far I have two countries that aren't quite rivals, but still hate each other and are racist to each other. The first country has a Czar, and the second country has a system of democratic government. A man from the second country is called upon to educate the younger of two brothers of the Czar, and obliges, leaving his family (Wife and four children) back home, for he can not afford to bring them along.
Anyway, the younger son is about five-nine (Haven't decided yet) And at that age where he asks a lot of questions, and my dood (Zel) has to explain them, and it's all very philosophical and scrutinizing. I'm really having fun writing it!
(I may also include some hoyay later on, when Nicky (the younger son) falls "in love" with Zel, but Zel tells him that he can't love him, because if Alek (older brother) dies, he has to carry on the family name. All sad and emotional)
(Also, thinking about a war between the two countries, and in order not to appear suspicious, Nicky (when he's on the throne) orders Zel to organize the troops, knowing perfectly well that he can't because he's fighting his home, and Zel replies to this, and Nicky apologizes. It's all very civilized as Zel is 'exiled' for treason to the throne. He goes back home and eldest son has left to join the war and his wife is quite sickly from an STD, and has had three more children to different men, and she dies knowing that her children won't die impoverished on the street. Woo! 6 more kids for Zel to look after without a job!
Aye, somehow he finds a home for them back in the first country, and then sets out to find his son, because he doesn't want him fighting. Somehow, information leaks to the army that he knows the layout of the palace, and he is taken forcefully and put on the front lines of the assassination crew, and if he bails, he will be killed. His son is on the second line, and hates him. Somehow, they end up together in the palace later on during the war, and they run into Nicky. Zel's son kills him. All sad and emotional again.
and I don't know where to go from there.
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Posted: Thu Feb 22, 2007 1:51 am
You and the bloody buttsecks
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Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 1:25 am
Who said anything about buttsecks???
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Posted: Sat Feb 24, 2007 7:05 pm
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Posted: Sat Feb 24, 2007 7:39 pm
Well I didn't. This story contains no buttsecks.
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Posted: Sat Feb 24, 2007 11:05 pm
Aw how disapointing, loza and no buttsecks. Its like eating icecream and finding it sour.
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Posted: Tue Feb 27, 2007 10:13 pm
touche. But srsly, there'll be a bit of hoyay, but no buttsecks.
And even if there is, I can't write about it.
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Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 12:31 am
yeah not sure if it would be appreciated
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Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 1:17 am
Yeah, I'm not thinking so
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