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 Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2007 4:56 pm
I had a very good female friend who committed suicide on November 7th of last year. I'm taking a Creative Writing class, and one assignment was to write an English Sonnet about a person who changed your life. So I wrote mine about her, and I got and A+ for the work.
A spring of love in this world has run dry,
Its flow, cut off by a cold, hard rope.
When I heard those words, I wanted to die.
Your life, filled with so much love and hope.
I miss your caring, loving embrace,
Your radiant, warm, and tender smile,
I'll never again see your bright face,
But I dream about it all the while.
Sometimes I dream that you are still alive,
And that everything will be okay.
If only there was a way you'd revive,
But I doubt I'll live to see the day.
And though you have walked through Death's black door,
I'll love you, Kiya, forevermore.
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Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2007 5:35 pm
Wow, that's awesome.
Well done!
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Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2007 11:44 pm
I feel yourm pain, you obviously loved her so much, friendly or no.
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Posted: Sun Feb 11, 2007 1:58 pm
Oh, believe me, I did love her... Wait, no I STILL love her...
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Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2007 12:31 am
Thats is so sad ... Am I the only one crying right now?
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Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 6:06 am
Aw!!! *sobs* no you are not the only one crying abs...that is really well written, you deserve the mark you got
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