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 Posted: Thu Feb 01, 2007 6:06 am
Okay, so I've been writing a fan fiction about, well, Kisame and I pairing up, and I have all these bits and pieces like how Hidan wants to kidnap me and make me his bride, Ricaru, an ex boyfriend (in real life his name is Ricky, he and I are worst enemies now)of my character, Rayn, I'm the leader's daughter/Naruto's sister, I have a Ten tails sphinx in me, Sasori likes me a lot but is paired up with Deidara, my friend Sage (Golda in real life) is Married to Gaara and they have a kid named Ichigo, and all this other crap that I haven't even thought of yet, so I was writing it, and decided I'd look it over for mistakes, I swear, I was amaised to see how many pages I'd already written, sure, I write a whole lot, but it's normally like, two or three pages a day, I wrote twenty two pages in about three days. 0.0
You can discuss what else I should put in my Fan Fiction and whatnot.
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Posted: Sun Apr 08, 2007 12:58 pm
It sounds amazing And I don't use that word lightly ((ok I use it ALL the time but thats not the point)) But I think it sould have a panda form the cloud village that eats peoples faces. Also the panda ((Katsura)) is the star of my fan-comic strip thingy
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Posted: Mon Sep 24, 2007 2:01 pm
no problems with what you have but i think some originality is needed. i mean the part that it's a take-off from naruto but the fact that 2 people have a child named ichigo what you couldn't think of a name? well good job with everything else though and good luck.
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Posted: Sun Jul 27, 2008 10:27 am
y Ichigo? thats not Naruto, thats Bleach! Ichigo Kurosaki, substitute soul reaper.
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