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 Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 12:27 pm
Beautiful is many things -
Tender songs and angel wings,
Ancient oaks and water blue,
Sunrise as the day is new.
A newborn babe, the gift of choice -
The pure sound of your lovely voice.
Beautiful has many faces
And is found in so few places.
It's the sweet innocence of love;
The stretch of bright, clear sky above.
But most of all (and I tell no lies)
Beautiful is the color of your eyes -
Your glorious, stunning holly-green eyes.
(!) xEuphoria (!)
Eh, just dabbling a bit.
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Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 12:35 pm
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Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 12:38 pm
Unlike you, sales-pitch-stealing-whore!
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Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 12:44 pm
(!) xEuphoria (!) Unlike you, sales-pitch-stealing-whore! D:
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Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 1:06 pm
It's a really good poem! ^^
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Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 1:42 pm
 +...seveileb eno on seil eht gnisahC+Zomgzomg even Jia didn't have any criticism for it!!
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Best thing evar, srsly.+Chasing the lies no one believes...+
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Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 2:16 pm
Hayashibara +...seveileb eno on seil eht gnisahC+Zomgzomg even Jia didn't have any criticism for it!!
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Best thing evar, srsly.+Chasing the lies no one believes...+ You want me to think of some!? Fine: Beautiful has many faces And is found in so few places. Is contradictory with the rest of the poem. Happy now Hayashibara!? But other than that, awesome poem!
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Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 3:06 pm
bloodXalchemist Hayashibara +...seveileb eno on seil eht gnisahC+Zomgzomg even Jia didn't have any criticism for it!!
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Best thing evar, srsly.+Chasing the lies no one believes...+ You want me to think of some!? Fine: Beautiful has many faces And is found in so few places. Is contradictory with the rest of the poem. Happy now Hayashibara!? But other than that, awesome poem! +...seveileb eno on seil eht gnisahC+Aw, you know you can call me Areku-chan. heart
And actually, I thought "Beautiful has many faces" didn't make much sense grammar wise, but as my mom says "This is the goddamn way I wanna write it, computer, and that's the goddamn way it'll stay! *Disables grammar check*"+Chasing the lies no one believes...+
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Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 4:26 pm
J'aurais voulu ne pas mourir... heart Very nice. I liked it and as Sarah said, it was pretty. heart J'aurais voulu ne jamais grandir...
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