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Ming Chen

PostPosted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 10:28 am


Beyond Today

Life is a clouded maze,
Engulfed to the brim.
Obscured by fog and haze,
Never can you see over the rim.

Of the ever tall walls that surround and trace,
All living things, so small and thin.
And then they die, without a face,
Compared to the rest, so insignificant.

Life, it flickers light for a second,
Sparkling in a brilliant shower of colors.
So bright, it makes you reckon,
That everything is okay, despite the others.

Then the second is over,
Completely engulfed by suffering and pain.
No longer happy, now just sober,
Then the tears will fall, driving you insane.

Even though the joy is gone,
And all but deteriorated.
Life is still there, to a close not yet drawn,
But all the point in life has disintegrated.

So still you keep marching on,
And attempt to hold back the sorrow.
Keeping an eye out for the dawn,
For there always is tomorrow.

-bloodXalchemist ♫
PostPosted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 10:50 am


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+...seveileb eno on seil eht gnisahC+

ZOMGZOMG JIA-CHAAAAAAAAAN~
*Glomp*
I STILL love this poem!! heart


+Chasing the lies no one believes...+
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Hayashibara


Ming Chen

PostPosted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 11:36 am


Hayashibara
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+...seveileb eno on seil eht gnisahC+

ZOMGZOMG JIA-CHAAAAAAAAAN~
*Glomp*
I STILL love this poem!! heart


+Chasing the lies no one believes...+
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^^ Thanks!

Life, it flickers light for a second,
Sparkling in a brilliant shower of colors.
So bright, it makes you reckon,
That everything is okay, despite the others.

I still don't like that stanza...I KNOW it rhymes, because I checked it with an online rhyming dictionary...but it sounds...strained. XP And I don't know how to fix it. XD
PostPosted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 12:11 pm


Awesome Poem!

I didn't know you two know each other

` S e x y S a r a h `
Crew


Ming Chen

PostPosted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 12:58 pm


` S e x y S a r a h `
Awesome Poem!

I didn't know you two know each other


Thanks!

XD We go the the same school and we share manga with each other. ^^
PostPosted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 4:37 pm


J'aurais voulu ne pas mourir...

heart It was really great. I could just imagine snapping in the background; it had a very steady beat to go with snapping, I thought. heart


J'aurais voulu ne jamais grandir...

-I n-z-e n-
Vice Captain


Ming Chen

PostPosted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 2:22 pm


Inzen
J'aurais voulu ne pas mourir...

heart It was really great. I could just imagine snapping in the background; it had a very steady beat to go with snapping, I thought. heart


J'aurais voulu ne jamais grandir...


^^ Thanks!
PostPosted: Tue Jan 30, 2007 2:48 am


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I love it.
<3
Especially the last line.
"For there always is tomorrow"
It's cute. :3
And the beat was great. 3nodding

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Chz

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