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Metal Man

(I wrote a ballad/poem I wrote about a superhero I made up called Metal man , enjoy)

Out of the darkness
There comes a bright like
To get rid of corruption
And to set things right
The Sea serpent Sheaza
The Viking God Thor
As king and queen they reigned
And a baby they bore
His name was Thorees
He was a Metal Head indeed
He swore to get rid of the emo
And all their wrath
And all their greed
But there was a much darker
More evil part in the world
Twas not a boy or not a girl
But a thing
That could crush Metal to the ground
More powerful than a dragon flock
That thing, was Indy Rock
But Metal Man trained
It would not die in vain
He crossed through the oceans
And through the Desert's sands
Until he had the pwer, of the world's greatest bands
Iron Madien is his eyes
This is the day Indy Rock dies
Korn in his hands
Which INdy Rock cannot stand
Judas Priest in his brain
Pantera in his hair
Black Sabbath in his heart
No
You could not tear him apart

(Tis all I have written so far)

Yes, do that! biggrin I'm going to be putting mine up sometime today. ^^

NYAARG! Writers block! scream

It's awesome! I could never do the whole ryhming thing. (Most likely the reason I can't write songs. >.>)

But what happened to the other one that was here??? sad