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Darkchaoticshadow

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Posted: Sun Jan 14, 2007 7:42 pm

hello, this is the first pic of my manga, "mechanoids" ita about giant robots that destroy monsters and other robots, (actually there is a more complex story but i won't get to that till later" here is the first sketch of the main charactre Riko and his Negative Pilot suit, hope you enjoy it^^
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Posted: Sun Jan 14, 2007 7:47 pm

Not bad, but your porportions could use some help. The width of the arms decreases to quickly at the wrists and the torso could use some shaping, but you know what you're doing. You've got a good start.

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Darkchaoticshadow

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Posted: Sun Jan 14, 2007 7:49 pm

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Not bad, but your porportions could use some help. The width of the arms decreases to quickly at the wrists and the torso could use some shaping, but you know what you're doing. You've got a good start.

thanks, i can post more pictures if you like^^

Posted: Sun Jan 14, 2007 7:50 pm

Go ahead, the more you have, the easier it is to see how far along you get. My pictures are posted as well in my own forum.

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Posted: Mon Jan 15, 2007 6:03 pm

Pretty good, better than I could do xD But it needs alot of work. Sorry ^^;;

Posted: Wed Jan 17, 2007 5:09 pm

Sammy likes them but shes not a good judge.

Sammy is 16

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Izztiecole

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Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 9:34 am

The first ones left arm is too long. Other wise its all fairly good. Take your time when you color, so to avoid scibbiling. The character designs are different. Keep up the hard work.

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