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 Posted: Fri Oct 29, 2004 5:19 am
Mighty is the wolf,
the Alpha leading the way
Let the hunt begin
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Posted: Fri Oct 29, 2004 1:20 pm
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Posted: Fri Oct 29, 2004 7:38 pm
Ive always liked haikus. Nice job smile
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Posted: Tue Nov 02, 2004 7:44 pm
Black copycat,
stretching along beside you.
I am but shadows.
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Posted: Tue Nov 02, 2004 9:23 pm
awsome! these are great. 3nodding
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Posted: Wed Nov 03, 2004 1:55 am
Itsarired Black copycat, stretching along beside you. I am but shadows. Erm, I'm only reading the first line as having four sylablles. Shouldn't it have five?
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Posted: Wed Nov 03, 2004 6:46 am
Meanwhile Itsarired Black copycat, stretching along beside you. I am but shadows. Erm, I'm only reading the first line as having four sylablles. Shouldn't it have five?
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Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2004 8:22 am
Whispers in the wind,
calling to my inner soul.
The essence of quest.
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Posted: Sat Nov 06, 2004 8:44 pm
Itsarired Whispers in the wind, calling to my inner soul. The essence of quest. For some reason I'm not liking this one as much as the others sweatdrop I think it has something to do with the last line. Its got the right number of syllables - it just doesn't feeel right to me. Anyway, that's just how I feel. Liked the first one best so far. 3nodding
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Posted: Sun Nov 07, 2004 7:12 am
The great white wolf stalks,
his prey fleeing for dear life.
In the end, blood flows.
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Posted: Thu Dec 02, 2004 9:58 pm
Love can be a scam,
that mother nature does play,
to get us to mate.
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Posted: Wed Dec 08, 2004 5:16 pm
Nicely done! I've never been able to write haikus, primarily because I hate being restricted by a syllable count. It's a beautiful style of poetry, though!
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The Bookwyrm Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Feb 02, 2005 12:39 pm
When is it over?
What shall we see when it ends,
When judgement day comes?
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Posted: Sun Feb 06, 2005 4:40 pm
I've never like Haikus before, but I like yours for some reason. ^^ They have a surprising amount of depth. I wrote two, for school I believe, and that's it.
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Posted: Mon Feb 07, 2005 8:22 am
Itsarired When is it over? What shall we see when it ends, When judgement day comes? ah, I like this^^
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