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 Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 12:34 pm
Writing in iambic pentameter
Is not as easy as is looks because
You think that a word has two syllables
But it only has one-- like the word squire.
Then you are stuck having to change the line
Which leads to frustration because you can't
Think of new ways to rephrase the sentence.
It takes a great amount of your time
If you go and try to make each line rhyme.
But I find that can be hard at times.
I found it is best if you finish the
Poem with an even number of lines
Otherwise the poem just ends oddly.
Where do I go from here because I'm lost?
What more can I say about this subject?
Dang it, all I need is one more line-- shoot!
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Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 6:49 pm
I liked that, pretty clever. I admit I don't know much about it, but it's nicely put together.
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Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 8:06 pm
well, it isn't all rhythmicly Iambic Pentameter, but the syllables are nice. Well, I hate Iambic Pentameter so you survived better than I.
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Posted: Sat Jan 20, 2007 9:56 am
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