Fragments - AKA my current Opus

This is a story I've been updating fairly regularly (the link is to my FP account since this site won't display Japanese properly and some characters are included for names). It's a change in style for me since I switch from first to third person depending on who's talking by chapter, and include a few letters written by various characters, since given the setting (circa 1500 Japan) correspondence was a major form of communication. I'd like to hear how it's working so far.