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 Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2007 12:47 pm
Nothingness
Nothing today seems to be going my way,
And I know I’ll leave my emptiness behind,
I seem to see clear in front of me,
I seem to know the truth.
I seem to be quiet against my will.
I was floating in nothingness,
On the brink of consciousness,
My eyes sought what they could not see,
My fingers felt what could not be,
And now I’m running through empty skies,
Waiving down to the empty earth, goodbye,
Searching through my fears,
I finally find what I sought for years,
Nothingness.
Nothing today seems to be going my way,
But then what the hell else is new?
I find that I can really fly as I soar away,
From this deep, blue sea,
That seems to be my cautiousness.
I was floating in nothingness,
On the brink of consciousness,
My eyes sought what they could not see,
My fingers felt what could not be,
And now I’m running through empty skies,
Waving down to the empty earth, goodbye,
Searching through my fears,
I finally find what I sought for years,
Nothingness.
I find that my mind is in some kind of bind,
As I seem to fight for my life.
I find I fulfill all that is real,
And then I find it is all in my mind.
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Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2007 3:25 pm
You know, with a bit of work and revision, this would make a great song.
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Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2007 6:56 pm
I am not a big poem fan but this is pretty good. ohh and I never welcomed you to this guild so Welcome and I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.
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Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2007 9:37 pm
Thanks guys!
The poem was originally intended to BE a song, but I suck at writing songs, not to mention catchy tunes to go along with them, so I just left it as a poem.
And thanks for the welcome! I was excited to be invited! Fanfiction! Yay!!
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Posted: Thu Jan 04, 2007 9:56 am
If you could find someone else to do the music for you, it would still make a good song, almost exactly as it is.
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