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 Posted: Thu Jun 23, 2005 10:50 am
Well this is going to be a lot of my work. I'm have a work going on in my journal that I might put up but I think I'll start with my poerty. If any of you can understand them please let me know. I read back through a few of these and I'm not sure what I was thinking when I wrote them. Yeah I guess that is enough intro for me.
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Posted: Thu Jun 23, 2005 11:55 am
~~Why~~
Why must you question me?
With all my thoughts written in poetry.
Why must you tie me down?
Is it because I succed with leaps and bounds?
Is it because you're scared of what I might become?
Scared that I might quit life and be done.
I won't quit because I won't let you win not this time
Because I'm going to succed with out you by my side.
I don't need you
but you need me don't you.
Why must you try to change me?
Is it because I am going to be what I want to be?
Why must you conform and follow the trends?
I won't conform and I will never listen
I am young and stupid I'll give you that
but I'm also growing up you have to let me do that
I am not your little one
so why must you treat me like one.
let me go and never wonder why
because you let me go and let me fly.
By: A-Jinxed-Kid
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Posted: Thu Jun 23, 2005 11:57 am
~~Holding tight~~
The very first time that he saw me,
I was in cut up jeans and a Rancid tee;
sitting alone on that park bench drenched in rain.
The rain was falling all around,
I looked up and he sat down,
and asked me "How are you dealing with your pain?"
I couldn't find the words to speek,
with my heart racing and emotions at there peek,
How was it that this boy could see so deep inside my mind.
My pain was vicious it held me tight,
and times I couldn't even sleep at night.
This pain that I felt was my one and only bind.
He then told me how to go on by "holding tight,
and even sometimes love will pull you through your fight,
just hold on, keep things real,
hold tight to your dreams don't let them go.
Find the strenght inside to go on,
look for another love at the dawn,
Don't keep running as fast as you are or time will seem to slow."
Time was slow it held me down,
Because the rain was falling all around,
and when I looked up he was gone never to be found.
By: A-Jinxed-Kid
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Posted: Fri Jun 24, 2005 9:14 am
OMG! Kit those are amazing! eek I think that every one in this forum can relate to Why?, I know I can. I love that writing style, its like every question you asked was retorical(sp?). I loved it. heart
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Posted: Fri Jun 24, 2005 10:35 am
I agree with Tenda (from now on LAM). But you [LAM] need to make that pic in your sig smaller before you get an email from the mods! THe limit as 500x500 pixels, and yours is 5somethingx850!
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Posted: Sat Jun 25, 2005 7:37 pm
Thanks guys I feel a little better about my poetry now! Thanks again guys.
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Posted: Sat Jun 25, 2005 7:59 pm
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Posted: Tue Jul 26, 2005 11:27 pm
I wrote this after I read a poem from a ex-friend of mine that was telling me that I should go kill myself because it would make him happy.
Untilted
As a warm flood pours from my eyes
I think of that poem you wrote for me
The tears warm my cold cheeks
as my insides twist and turn.
My soul dies once more
as I hit the stage where my mind takes control
The long process starts
the recovery
I try to build up my walls,
but they fall to the ground
as I know I am as good as dead to you
Things never work out for me
I can feel a friend for 12 years slipping away from me.
Why?
because of you.
My tears are of anger now as I think
of how you took my friend from me.
I let my eyes drift down to the
water that was starting to turn red
as blood drips from my wrists.
Wrists YOU told me to cut.
Can you be happy now?
By: A-Jinxed-Kid
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Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2005 10:46 am
Any kind of comment for the poems above is fine with me I would love to know what you think.
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Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2005 3:24 pm
I like all your poems very much. biggrin I really don't have any suggestions about them. But, that's ok! Can't wait for more!
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Posted: Sun Jul 31, 2005 6:42 pm
Thanks FieryKnife. I wasn't really sure about putting up the one I named Untitled. It was a little personal and I'm a little worried about how I feel about it now. Hopefully I can get to work on a story and have it up soon. I'll keep writing some poetry for you. blaugh Well I guess that about does it for me for now.
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Posted: Wed Aug 03, 2005 1:52 pm
Often the personal stuff is the best material. I'd think that's part of the reason people write-to create an outlet for our stress and worries and insecurities.
And if you do change your mind about your feelings later, it doesn't change how you felt before, right?
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Posted: Fri Aug 05, 2005 11:17 am
Right! I feel different now and I looked back on that poem and I thought it was good I wasn't scared anymore about how people were going to take it.
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Posted: Fri Aug 05, 2005 2:24 pm
That's good! biggrin I always try not to feel insecure of what I put on here, but it's hard for me. sweatdrop
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