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[Ren The Ryoko]

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 01, 2007 5:00 pm


((So after a long debate with an anti-SasuNaru shipper, I became inspired to write this fic. We both agreed that Sasuke would end up dying someday in the manga probably, but how and why was unknown. I was tired, and I had been taking a good long look at the SasuNaru couple.

It’s a hard couple to look at. It’s full of anger and hate, conflict and struggle, devotion and need. It’s sad and hard to look at it, to understand it, and to write it.

To all those fans out there who think SasuNaru is CUTE, you need to have you head examined. It’s not.
So here we have it. The end.))

EDIT: Spoiler Warning: Sasuke Revival Arc related spoiler....


Disclaimer: If only, if only I owned them...but sadly, Kishimoto-sama does.

---------------Only the Rain.-----------------


“Fight me.” That cold icy voice that haunted his dreams at night had commanded. He hadn’t even know the other was there. He turned to face him, and regretted it dearly. Sasuke. Cold, emotionless, cruelly evil Sasuke stood in front of him with his dead eyes, demanding a fight. A deep anger rose in his chest. How dare he! How dare he, after he had trained so long and tried so hard to bring him back, just show up one day out of the blue! How dare he demand a fight, no doubt to raise his own power, for his own dreams. How dare he show his traitorous face to him!

“Fine.” He spat and clenched his fists. “I’ll fight you.” The words left a sour taste in his mouth. He would pummel him. Sasuke deserved it. He deserved death for betraying him! For ruining his life! He would pay. He would pay for making Sakura cry.

Naruto wasn’t sure who made the first move. They had stood there for a long time in the forest, birds silent, wind blowing, trees bending in the oncoming storm. But by God, he had made the last.

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Sasuke sunk to his knees in front of him, his eyes glazed over slightly as the rain poured down around them both. Naruto stood, his hand stinging from his Ragensan. As the boy collapsed on the ground, Naruto too, fell to his knees. He felt like he might die. Everything hurt. Naruto looked over at Sasuke, snarling a little. He had tried to hard to save the b*****d, and now he might die because of him. It had hurt so badly when Sasuke had left, and he had thrown everything away to get him back. He needed him. In time he came to resent Sasuke for it. His devotion to saving Sasuke had dragged him down, but he still couldn’t let him go. He glared at Sasuke. He was expecting a glare right back from the Uchiha.

He got a smile. Pained, cracked and faded and small worn out ghostly smile creased Sasuke’s face. And behind all the hate, all the blood and all the pain, Naruto thought he could see a ghost of a shadow of the old Sasuke. Team 7 Sasuke. The Sasuke he knew. The Sasuke he had tried to save. The Sasuke he had failed to protect from himself. It hurt to see him again after so long.

“Sasuke?” Naruto said, stunned. Sasuke almost laughed, and coughed up a mouthful of blood instead. He couldn’t believe it. He wouldn’t. Sasuke...Sasuke was back. The Sasuke that had taken over for so many years, who was only living to kill, seemed to dissipate with the rain. The boy that Naruto had dedicated his life to saving, was here. He was hurt. He was dying. Naruto looked down at his own hands, and saw them covered in his best friend, his worst enemy, his greatest rival, his most hated traitor, Uchiha Sasuke’s blood. He felt sick.

“Naruto...it’s ok.” He said softly. His breathing was raspy, like he was choking on his own blood. “Everything is ok...I’m the last now. I’m the last of the Uchiha.” He snorted a little in amusement. “I’m all that’s left now, It’s ok.”

“But..Itachi...” Naruto started, but Sasuke shook his head. /He’s killed Itachi./ Naruto’s eyes widened. /He came back here to die./ Naruto wasn’t the brightest crayon in the box, but he knew Sasuke better than anyone. Sasuke had come home, to Kohona, to die. Now that Itachi was dead, there was nothing left to live for.

“I’m the last.”

“No.” Naruto said, shaking his head. “Sasuke..no. It’s not ok. You can not die here.” He had tried. He had tried so damn hard to save him. He couldn’t die. No way. He hadn’t given up yet, and he never would. He would save Sasuke if it killed him. “Sasuke you b*****d! You can’t die!”

“I’m dying Naruto.” He said softly. He breaths were louder now, and filled with the watery sound of blood. His eyes held both life in them, and the promise of death. “I’m saved now.”

“You are not saved!” He yelled. “I’m supposed to save you! To bring you back! I tried to hard to let you die Sasuke!” This could not happen. He would not let this happen. As a child, Sasuke was the only one who was like him. Alone. They were friends. They were rivals. They were brothers. What were they? “I’m supposed to bring you back Sasuke!”

Blood soaked into the ground around him, staining the grass red. The boy shook his head. “It’s over Naruto.” The rain poured down.

“Nothing is over!” Sasuke had saved his life from Haku so long ago, all Naruto had ever wanted to do in return was save Sasuke’s soul. “You need to go home! Sakura is waiting for us. She’s waited to long for you! She needs you Sasuke! She loves you! I...I...” Naruto reached down to grab Sasuke by the collar. To slap him silly. To tell him to get his lazy a** up and get the ******** home.

But he stopped. The hole is Sasuke’s chest oozed blood. It was all Nauto’s fault. Naruto had killed him. Sasuke choose Naruto to kill him. Hot tears rose in Naruto’s eyes. “Sasuke...” He said softly. His heart was trying to rip itself out of his chest. “Oh God..Sasuke. Why me?”

“I’ve sinned to much.” Sasuke muttered, barely audible above the pouring rain. “I’ve sinned. I can trust you. I trust you Naruto. Now...my sins can go away.”

Naruto felt resentment rise in his chest again, bubbling up, past his sorrow. “Shut up!” He yelled. His own injuries tore at him, but he didn’t care. “You’re such a brat Sasuke! Shut up!” He beat the blood stained ground. “Your sins won’t go away if you die! So shut up! Come home with me and we can repent together! I let you go! I’m to blame! Sasuke..Sasuke please...” Naruto pleaded in vain.

Sasuke’s eyes grew dimmer. “I did it Naruto. I killed him. I killed my brother. I finally...I finally did it.” A small tear ran down the side of his face to mingle with the blood and rain on the ground. “I really, really did it.” His voice was softly, and full of blood. But it was happy. He was happy. After so long, Sasuke was happy again. The rain began to lift.

“Sasuke...” As the soft cold drizzle rained down on him, he finally realized what he needed to tell him. “Sasuke...I love you.”

But there was no sound above the rain, so response, not even the sound of a traitor and a friend, breathing softly in his own blood. Only the rain could be heard, and Naruto knew that it was over, and all he could do was cry.
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 01, 2007 5:28 pm


okay no not cute but that was beautiful... seriously I need a tissue...well more now as im sick but ... -snif- im just gonna sit a respectful distace away and admire ur talent and honour how sad and beautiful that was.

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 02, 2007 4:36 am


Okay, wow. That was totally, incredibly awesome. Like, way better than any of my death scenes. *guiltily sweeps deathfics under the carpet* You've got talent, girl.

You seem to suffer from the same affliction as many members of this guild- lack of common punctuational sense, coupled with missing-letter syndrome. You've got some misplaced commas, as well as some missing ones; you actually seem to be missing a whole word or two; and you have no warning of the spoilers. Sasuke turns evil? What the frell? Anywho, all you really need, in my opinion, is to proofread. Correct the small mistakes. Other than that, it was a wonderful read.
Oh, and I totally agree that SasuNaru is not cute. It might be good eyecandy, but braincandy it is not. While I can think of a few pairings that might be angstier, there aren't many.

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 02, 2007 7:50 am


Aww...that was good! It needs to be refined though for reasons our beloved PostNazi stated above.

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 02, 2007 7:54 am


I think SasuNaru are cute xd I know i'm horriable.... BUt come on all that friendship and change going on. I think it's adobale 4laugh But I loved your story. The thing about Sasuke killing itachi, that was a nice twist. I wasn't expecting that. It was cool! Just needs a bit more detail I guess. Other then that it was a great little agasty one-shot. I like the ending though!
PostPosted: Tue Jan 02, 2007 6:21 pm


I think that is a really good story. but what I really want to know is the fighting scene, it must be really intense since Naruto and Sasuke are some of the best ninjas in Naruto. and as Casiela said you should put a spoiler alert somewhere. Other wise it is a very good story.

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 04, 2007 10:20 am


okay, I'm not that good with naruto. I've only seen it a couple times. (Due too my sister [000hinata000] and her obession) But I arn't Sasuke and naruto um... worst enemies! Would that ever happen? I never really read guy stuff but I like the start of it! That part was good!
PostPosted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 12:46 pm


PrettyLittlePrincess
okay, I'm not that good with naruto. I've only seen it a couple times. (Due too my sister [000hinata000] and her obession) But I arn't Sasuke and naruto um... worst enemies! Would that ever happen? I never really read guy stuff but I like the start of it! That part was good!

No. They are teamamtes, best friends, and rivals. And, if you ask me, soul mates. Later in the show. [spoilers] Sasuke does betray them and run off with the enemy though. But NAruto is SO dedicated to bring him back home...so sweet

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 11:28 am


Won't you write a Yuri-pairing for a change?
PostPosted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 8:14 am


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Won't you write a Yuri-pairing for a change?


Because....i dont know. I dont really like a lot of Femslash...I guess I'm a bit shallow that way...Any couple in particular you'd like me to write?

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