Sorry for the long inactive. I did not update the one I posted in Gaia anymore. Besides, the one I posted here is the raw version. I shifted to Fanfiction.net with the same title but the chapters were beta-read by experienced beta-reader first.
Kittten
Are you trying to hav e the charactors act as Salvatore potrays them? Also, there should be more exploration, and contempation from Bruenor and the others, they don't really seem to care.
These are just a couple of questions I have...
I do understands that some of the characters act...differently. I apologize for that. About the lack of interest from Bruenor and others, I decided that under this circumstance, they cannot freely abandon Mithral Hall. They can just believe in Drizzt. I'll try to potrays the characters as best as I could in the coming chapters. Thanks for the comment.
Currently, only the prologue and chapter 1 were uploaded, so it's almost the same as the ones I posted here. Chapter 2 and 3 has been send to my beta-reader and I'll upload them when he finished checking.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3364889/1/ 
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