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 Posted: Thu Dec 28, 2006 3:28 pm
I decided to make a fanfic of my Mew I made two years ago... I love her so don’t criticize her please. You can criticize my fanfic but... not my Mew. ^_^ She's my ultimate favourite Mew (after Purin of course!)
Okay, here's Chapter One
~Chapter One~
Chapter One
I tossed and turned in bed.
My name is Pepper Yamaneko Koneko. I am misunderstood. Nobody understands me or loves me; I am on my own in the world. I’ve been having these weird dreams lately, and I don’t know what they mean. An animal jumping into me and me fighting these… creatures…
I got up, it was the morning on October 3rd and the sun blazed into my eyes. I have lived alone since both my parents and siblings died five years ago. I’ve had to provide for myself for these past five years, but luckily I had a job and got paid every week.
“Konnichiwa, what would you like today sir?” “Uh a burger and don’t hold on the sauce.” “Would you like fries with that?”
It wasn’t the best job I could ever get but it’s still something I guess.
When I got home, it was almost sunset. My working hours are unrealistic, but there's no point in coming home if there's no-one nor nothing to come home to.
I took my battered shoes off my acheing feet, all I want to do after my job is have a bite to eat then go to sleep, so I can wake up to do the whole thing again.
I slowly went into the empty kitchen and took a peice of bread from the last loaf on the cupboard. My food supply was unusually low this week, and not only that, my electricity and water bills are due. For all I know, my water could go and I could be dehydrated(sp?) aswell as hungry.
I ate my peice of bread and hopped into bed. I hate my life. It's all messed up, I just wish my family were here.. why couldnt I be in that car crash so I wouldnt have to live in misery?!
That night, I cried myself to sleep.
~~Chapter 1, Fini~~
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Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 12:23 am
YO! its Taz - you never told me that you done this!? it is REALLY well written! i'm going to try to put our Devotion to a Pringle on here, even if it may have nothing to do with TMM, and plus - I'VE BEEN ACCEPTED TO THE GUILD! hoorah! but it says that i havent when i look up my name....weird.....but they said that they accepted me^^
talk later Loz*buiibuii
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Posted: Sun Feb 11, 2007 11:01 pm
Righteo Taz, righteo. xDD
I'm FINALLY going to do more of this story's chapter now.. sweatdrop
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Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2007 5:50 pm
okay... look, I hate to rain on the little fanfic parade, but please, next time, post the whole chapter all in one post... it gets annoying when it isn't. Also, when you write another chapter, you need another thread. Please make sure you have a separate thread for the next chapter. This does not count as your warning, since you're not actually breaking any rules, but I want to make sure you do things right.
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Posted: Sun Feb 18, 2007 9:50 pm
Oh okies, couldnt be bothered editing | D
Yepp, when I do the next Chapter, I'll post it in another thread : 3
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Posted: Wed Feb 28, 2007 10:25 pm
Edited with the first post thing xDD
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Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 10:23 am
Nice chapter ^^ You need to write more... then I can comment on the flavor of the story xD I like it ^^ Write more now.
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Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 9:48 pm
Be patient xDD
The same you said to mee domokun
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