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Valkyrie of 0din

Dedicated Warrior

PostPosted: Tue Dec 19, 2006 8:24 pm


First, a Bio:

Name: Ally Ami Akiyama User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.
Age: 10 (22 older)
Gender: Female
Species: Human (but with Digimon data bound into DNA)
Ht: 4' 6" (6' 4" older)
Hair color: brown w/ red tint (a tiny bit darker when older)
Eye color: blue-ish amethyst (red when older)
personality: Ally, at first she's a little kid who can take insults and be sad and not do anything about it. Later she can be all sweet and kind one moment, and can do a complete one-eighty if anything sets her off. Ally's older personality is a bit more controlled on her temper, but she can still be easily provoked if given a good enough reason.

Bio:
fanfic#1: Ally is a little kid of the age of 10, she's a diligent student two years ahead in her education, and usually gets perfect scores on everything... that is, until an incident in the Digital World interferes... Ally lands in the Digital World and is met by a fight between a Digimon named Lilithmon, and the legendary warrior, Kumamon. Kumamon is destroyed, and just as Lilithmon towards Ally, Lowemon scares her off and rescues her. Ally meets the rest of the legendary warriors (who aren't destroyed), and then a Bakemon (disguised as one of the warriors) leads Lowemon out (followed by Ally, who the Bakemon wouldn't think would get in the way,) to Lilithmon, and she destroyes Lowemon, but, doesn't get his data; Ally gets in the way of the data stream, and instead of it goign to Lilithmon, the data and dark spirits are rushed into Ally, binding with the (unbeknownst) darkness within her, Ally falls unconcious. Ally wakes up, and soon a voice speaks to her, only to learn that the spirits are inside of her, and that they have been turned evil, and panics back to the Real World (Earth). The Digimon who's thoughts are now one with hers, is none other than Duskmon, the corrupt version of Lowemon... Duskmon eventually figures out he can take over Ally's mind and make her do whatever he wants... including almost killing her friend, and going on a rampage through the city...


(I'm still trying to figure this fanfic out; work out the errors, typos, character presonalities etc. If you see any errors, contact me... This story is in a First-person view, as if Ally is telling the story herself, if you can't understand it oh well, sorry >.< Also, this is script format. Also also, I don't know much about JAP names of Digimon)

Voice details:

Me=Ally
Low=Lowemon
?=Lillithmon
Kum=Kumamon



Ally: "Hi there. My name is Ally, and I'm a good kid, but I get into trouble, but it’s not me that started it. The bullies at my school used to..."
Me: It all started, one day, while I was walking home... I found a portal... to the Digital World.

*I'm walking through a [familiar-looking (if you watch digimon 03)] park, listening to a CD, and singing along to it.*
*I stop to look at cement steps leading up to a weird cement shed-looking thing with metal bars*
Me: "I wonder what that thing is..."
*I run up the stairs*
Me: "I wonder who was here last. They sure spent a long time digging... there's a tunnel, I wonder where it leads...?" *I crawl through it and get to the end. But at the end, there is, something shiny, little do I know it's a portal.*
Me: "What's, that? I wonder if it's safe to touch... Oh well, nothing gained from not doing anything, or something like that..." *I put my hand through it* "Hey! It's safe! I wonder if this is a portal to another world." *I didn't know how right I was...*
Me: "WOOOOOOAAAAAAHHHHH!!! Oomph!" *I land on solid ground, surprisingly unharmed* "Where, am I?"
*I see two creatures fighting: An evil-looking female digimon, and a white bear one.*
Kum: "CRYSTAL BREEZE!" *the evil digimon dodges, then attacks, and scans the data of the bear digimon, and the bear digimon disappears.*
Me: O_o "What the?!"
?: "Kumamon first, and now a little human girl to destroy, AH HA HA HA HA-"
Low: "LEAVE HER ALONE!"
?: "Eh?"
Low: SHADOW METEOR!" *he misses*
?: "I think that it's time for me to leave. Buh-bye."
Me: "What are you guys?!"
Low: "I am Lowemon, and that was an evil Digimon."
Me: "No wonder she destroyed that poor little snowy bear..."
Low: "A LITTLE BEAR DIGIMON?! NO, KUMAMON! She's destroyed another one of us."
Me: “Us?"
Low: "The Ten Legendary Warriors; Me, Lowemon of Darkness, Kumamon of Ice, Lobomon of Light, Mercurymon of Metal, Lanamon of Water, Agunimon of Flame, Kazemon of Wind, Grumblemon of Earth, Arbormon of Wood, and Beetlemon of Thunder."
Me: "Wow... I'm Ally, and you're Lowemon, right?"
Low: "Uh-huh."
Me: "Wow would my friends be impressed, I bet that they've never seen real live Digimon before!"
Low: "That depends."
Me: "Huh?!"
Low: "What are your friends' names?"
Me: "Well there's; Marie, Koji, Kouichi, Zoe, Takuya, and J.P. So?"
Low: "Those last five have all been here. They were all legendary warriors."
Me: "Wow... So which ones were which?"
Low: "Well, Koji was Lobomon, Kouichi used to be me, Zoe was Kazemon, Takuya was Agunimon, and J.P. was Beetlemon."
Me: "Light and... Hey! Wait a minute! You're telling me that, even though that they're twins, Koji and Kouichi were Light and Darkness?!"
Low: "Yes. But I must tell you something; Kouichi was not always Lowemon."
Me: "How?"

Low: "There once was a very evil digimon named Cherubimon, who took over this world. All the human children who came here, came on the Trailmon. Except Kouichi. Kouichi had been chasing after Koji, trying to talk to him, when Koji didn't even know that he existed. Koji took an elevator, and the doors closed right before he got there. Then, he decided to try to follow him by stairs. Kouichi lost his footing and fell from the top of a flight of stairs, and landed on the floor below the stairs. Somehow, his non-physical form got into the Digital World, and Cherubimon found him, and gave him the corrupt spirit of darkness. I am the true warrior of Darkness. He erased Kouichi's memories, and so Kouichi forgot that he had a brother, and that he was human. But one day, Takuya and Koji worked together and finally defeated him, taking away the spirits of darkness from him. He stood up to a fake but powerful Cherubimon a little bit after that, and got the spirits back, but that time, they were the true spirits... That's about it."

Me: "Poor Kouichi, I-I never knew that happened. He never told me about that."
Low: “It’s even hard for even me to talk about it."
Me: "Can I meet the other Legendary Warriors now?"
Low: “Sure, But don't ask for Beetlemon, Grumblemon, Arbormon, or Kumamon. Since they've been destroyed already."
Me: "Right..."
PostPosted: Tue Dec 19, 2006 9:38 pm


That was pretty good. ^^ I wish to see more soon.
But just something to point out, unless it was a typo or something, it's not Lanamon, it's Ranamon.

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Valkyrie of 0din

Dedicated Warrior

PostPosted: Wed Dec 20, 2006 3:35 pm


Well the R and L are said the same in Japanese, I don't think i need to change it honestly sweatdrop Just bear with me please, and Thank you for your comments! ^^ Chapter 2 (luckily I have this posted on DeviantArt....)

Voices:
Me=Ally
Low=Lowemon
Lan=lanamon/Ranamon (lol)
Oph=Ophanimon
Che=Cherubimon
Lili=Lillithmon
Lob=Lobomon
Agu=Agunimon
K=Kazemon


Chapter 2 Begin

*Me and Lowemon walked to a headquarters. There is an angel digimon working at a control panel.*
Low: "This is Ophanimon. One of the Three Celestial Digimon."
Me: "Oooo, she's beautiful."
Oph: "Thank you, and you are?"
Me: "My name's Ally. I'm a friend of Kouichi's."
Oph: "Really? Welcome."
Low: "And that is Seraphimon" *he points* "and Cherubimon is over there."
Me: "WHAT?! But I thought you said that Cherubimon is evil!"
Low: "He isn't anymore. Takuya and Koji defeated him and purified his data."
Che: "He is right, I thank those two more than I could ever describe..."
Me: "Wow. It's hard to believe that my friends used to be some of the legendary warriors. That's so cool!"
Agu: "Hey there Lowemon, where've you been?"
Me: "You sound exactly like Takuya!"
Agu: “Of course I do, he used to be me.”

Low: "Well, I have some bad news: Kumamon was destroyed."
Oph: "I know. I have something to show you, a device that will monitor where the data of all of us is. I made it ever since Lilithmon started attacking, and I fear that not even I could stand up to her... Kumamon, Grumblemon, Arbormon, and Beetlemon's symbols and spirits are all grouped together because Lilithmon has destroyed them, while all the other symbols are here, scattered. Only the ones who have been turned into data have the spirits showing."
Me: "Impressive."
Oph: "It also shows where Lilithmon is, by showing the data she's scanned. We should stop her once and for all, but not now, later."
Low: "I agree. Oh yeah, Ally wanted to see the other remaining warriors. I promised her."
Oph: "Of course. Come, all legendary Warriors."
*I watch as all of them come to the same place that I am. All of them look tough.*
Oph: "Everyone, this is Ally. She's a human, and Lowemon tells me that she's friends with Takuya and the others. Introduce yourselves please."
Agu: "I'm Agunimon, but you knew that already."
K: "I'm Kazemon, and Zoe used to be me."
Lan: "I'm Lanamon, welcome shuga'."
Mer: "I am Mercurymon, thou is welcome here."
Lob: "And I'm Lobomon, Koji used to be me."
Low: "And we all have different forms, Beast Spirit forms."
all *except Mercurymon* : "SLIDE EVOLUTION!"
Agu: "BURNINGGREYMON!"
Kaz: "ZEPHYRMON!"
Lan: "CALMARIMON!"
Lob: "KENDOGARURUMON!"
Low: "JAGERLOWEMON!"
Me: "Wow..... But what about you Mercurymon?"
Mer: "I'd break the ceiling."
Me: "Oh... I see..."
*All of them change back*
Lan: "Hey Lowemon, I wanted to show you somethin."
Low: "Really? Alright."
Me: "Hey, wait up! I'm coming with you!"



*We are somewhere in the forest. When Lanamon stops.*
Lan: "Here it is."
Low: "What? I don't see- Ugh!"
*Lanamon was really a different Digimon in disguise!*
Low: "What?! You're just a Bakemon! Where's the real Lanamon then?!"
*The Bakemon floats away, then Lilithmon jumps out the bushes in front of us.*
Low: "YOU DESTROYED HER DIDN'T YOU?! I'M GOING TO DESTROY YOU ONCE AND FOR ALL! SHADOW METEOR!"
*She dodges, then kicks Lowemon in the face.*
Low: "SHADOW LANCE!"
Me: "I think that something’s enhancing her speed and power!"
Low: "You, might, be, right!"
Lili: "PHANTOM PAIN!"
Low: "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!"
Me: "LOWEMON!!!" *I get this stupid idea to jump in front of the data being to try and stop it from being scanned. And when I jump into the stream of data, it’s one of the most painful things that has happened to me...* "AAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!"
*The data disappears, so does Lowemon, and I land back on the ground, semi-conscious.*
Me: I, failed.. Couldn't... do... anything... to help.... *I black-out.*
*Lobomon comes and picks me up off the ground, and carries me back to the headquarters, where everyone else is sleeping.*

END CHAPTER 2



just one moment here, Lilithmon's attack....
"Phantom Pain: She spews a bewitching mist of darkness that curses her opponent."
*laughs manically* ^^
PostPosted: Sun Dec 24, 2006 2:25 pm


I'm gonna go ahead and post chapter 3 anyways...




*I wake up*
Me: "Ohh..... What, happened to me? I feel like I just got beat up at school...”
*Someone whispers my name, but no one is around.*
Me: "...I must be hearing things..."
*I go back to sleep. When I wake up again, the sun is up and Ophanimon is too, working at her monitor.*
Me: "Good morning Ophanimon. Lowemon got destroyed last night, did you know that?"
Oph: "Yes. I saw that on my screen and turned it off to sleep afterwards. I just added that it will watch where I and Seraphimon and Cherubimon are. There, that's it. What?!"
Me: "What?"
Oph: "It must not be working right, the symbol of Darkness is right behind me, and it also has a spirit, but I can't make it out. But that would mean that Lowemon would be where you're standing. Hmmm."
Me: "Oh Ophanimon, that's ridiculous, Lilithmon scanned him, that's impossible that he would be where I am!"
?: Oh, but aren't I?
Me: "Who's there...?"
Oph: "Ally? Is something the matter...?"
Me: "Nothing."
Oph: "...Okay..."
Me: Who's there?
?: I am the Legendary Warrior of Darkness, try and guess where I am...
Me: what happened to Lowemon...? His voice didn't freak me out like yours...
?: Him? He's gone. Now, try to guess where I am. I am not in front of you, back of you, left or right of you, or above or below you, and nobody else can hear me. Where am I?

*I did some thinking for a few seconds, and then finally; it hit me.*
Me: You're.... are you...?! Inside of me?!
?: Yes...
*I don't think that I'd been more terrified in my life. I bet that the color had drained out of my face. Also, there was a chill down my spine, and suddenly I felt weak.*
Me: "I-I'll be l-leaving now." *I run for it. But what I didn't know, is that Ophanimon had finally gotten a clear picture of the spirit.*
Oph: "Hmm. Now the spirit is moving, and it seems like it's moving where-" *she gasps* "Ally, COME BACK!"
*But what Ophanimon didn't know, is that I had asked a Digimon where I had fallen, and it knew, so I went to that spot, and the portal teleported me back to the tiny cement building in the real world.*

Me: "Hello? Are you still here, with me?"
Dus: Yes.
Me: "So, if your not Lowemon, what is your name?"
Dus: Duskmon.
Me: "Duskmon... right... But, how do I know that your just not some voice in my head, and that when I landed in the Digital World I didn't bump my head or anything?"
Dus: You stepped in front of Lowemon's data when he was being scanned, and when someone blocks the data from being scanned, the data gets inside them. It was only a theory, but since I'm stuck in you it's a fact...
Me: "I see. I wonder what time it is, I should've been gone for at least a day now."
Dus: Actually, no. Time goes faster in the Digital World than in the real world, so, you've probably only been gone for about a minute here.
Me: "Good. If I was missing for a day, my mother would kill me. Not literally though."

*I walk home. When I get there, my mom and dad, Rika and Ryo are there waiting for me*
Rika: "Welcome home honey. Hey, you look a little pale, did something happen on the way home?"
Me: "Err, yeah! Someone jumped out from a bush and scared me."
Ryo: "That's not good. I've got an idea, how about we pick you up from school from now on?"
Me: "Good idea."
*Then, my 5-year-old brother, T.J., comes barging in, crying*
T.J.: "MOMMY!"
Rika: "What is it?"
T.J.: "The light in the bathroom blewed out!" *He doesn't know how to talk proper English yet.*
Ryo: "I'll go and fix it."
Rika: "Don't you have homework now?"
Me: "Oh yeah."

*I go up to my room, and when I get up there, I look at myself in the mirror, but there's not just me, but some creepy looking creature behind me. I almost faint.*
Me: "What, in the, world?!"
Dus: I see you've found out what I look like... *laughs quietly and evily*
Me: "That's YOU? Oh man, you are the SCARIEST thing I have EVER seen. I better get on my homework now..."

*After I do my homework, I go downstairs, and my parents aren't there, so I go into their room to see if they're there, and see two glowing, tech objects on the sink in the bathroom; Digivices. Real ones.*
Me: "What the...? How the heck... My parents used to be invloved in saving Digimon?! Cool."
Dus: You know, anyone who's been to the Digital World can probably see me in your reflection, regardless of whether you want them to see or not. So steer clear of mirrors from now on.
Me: "Uh-oh."
Dus: What now...
Me: "My parents are going to drive me to and from school! There's a mirror right in the car!!"
Dus: Just tell them that you want to walk to school still... honestly I don't see how they put up with you, so far I think you're a whiny little brat... Your brother even more...
Me: -_-...

*Next morning*
Me: "Hey mom?"
Rika: "Yes Ally...?"
Me: "I was just wondering, can I still walk to school, I think that I need the exercise."
Rika: "Well, you don't NEED it... but I guess you can walk to school..."
Me: "Okay. I better get going, otherwise I'll be late. Bye!"

END CHAPTER 3

(and of course... I use English names >.< )

Valkyrie of 0din

Dedicated Warrior

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