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DanceofTwilight
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 19, 2006 8:00 pm


Okay. This first poem is just a random one. It was after a volleyball practice that was insane. I was talking about what we did and somehow managed to get it in poem form... sweatdrop


So sore

from volleyball.

There was this crazy guy,

helping us with agility, speed,

and all that stuff.

Three sets of everything,

it really wasn't fun.

Even though I was laughing at myself

and at Danie right next to me.

She almost looked like a pigeon,

trying to fly away.

Suicides, crunches, lunges,

it was really tiring.

Laps and laps of running,

it seemed like it would never stop.

It was the workout from hell,

never stopping, and if so,

only two seconds of rest.

I saw the light at the end of the tunnel

as I rounded the corner of the last lap.

Salvation!!!


That is more or less for your entertainment. Just randomness.
PostPosted: Tue Dec 19, 2006 8:07 pm


I was watching The Notebook when I thought up this poem. And the next day, since math is oh so boring, I wrote it during math. =]

Sunrise Lake
___________

Rippling water
so graceful,
so serene.
A light fog
hovers above
barely seen.
The sun paints
the rippling water
a bright orange,
soon to turn
to yellow.
Pearly white swans
graze the surface,
so meticulously.
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I'm having a little bit of trouble coming up with the ending. I was thinking about writing about the reflection of the mountains in the water. Something like that.

Thoughts?
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