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Lazuri-Hikari Vice Captain
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 Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 3:21 pm
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Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 3:35 pm
Pretty good.
You should try shading more in the clothing and skin.
The background, I think you can be a little more realistic.
Though may I add that the girl's head seems too big for her body and her right [left through her point of view] is somewhat disfigured.
<3
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Lazuri-Hikari Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 7:08 pm
thankies ^.^
(yeah, i wasnt going to include a background)
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Posted: Sat Dec 16, 2006 12:40 pm
I agree that the head might be a little too big for the body 3nodding
also the neck is too long...and the shading between the boobs is kinda random...maybe you should think more about where you want to shade and highlight...
If you wanna keep a background then get rid of the tree and just stick with the grass and the sky cuz the tree is wierd..
I think it is still pretty good though. The little basket is cute and it has a clear show of emotions so at least you can convey the emotions easily 3nodding
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Posted: Sat Dec 16, 2006 5:39 pm
YOU CGED A PICCYY!! -DIES-
Hm.. The tree looks gay. Sorry.. >.> GET RID OF IT. Use a tree brush or something. Anything but that. I think the grass should be darker but that's my opinion. For the sky, you can go to Filter>Render>Clouds. It'll give an awesome effect, something better than having a plain non-realistic sky.
For the eye, try using the dodge tool. Not necessary though but it's good if you can use it. The hair needs more highlights. DODGE TOOL. <-- my best friend. Try more practice with the tuturial I gave you. Try to figure out a light source. The shading well is.. weird... Is can't really see the light effects that well. And shade the skin a tinsy bit more...
Tip - Clean the image before you color.
Did you re-outline your drawing on Photoshop? ...
[I could go on but my fingers hurt. t=t;;]
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