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 Posted: Sun Dec 10, 2006 12:25 pm
Hi I'm new here's a peom from my boredom.
burning fire
cold desire
take me by the hand
take me near
the desert of fear
and drop me in the sand
let me roam
until I'm home
and can weep in bed
words unknown
have flown
all around my head
a scream outside
I have to hide
I've run all day
eyes like coal
he'll take my soul
I have to get away
I must run
into the sun
I cannot let him find me
faster I go
can't be slow
he is right behind me
I trip and fall
I hear his call
it's over I know
he starts to grin
he knows he'll win
I've never felt so low
up rises the moon
it will be soon
it's over and done
eyes like coal
he'll take my soul
if i ever had one
he come's to me
now i see
how handsome he can be
I fly like a dove
I'm in love
my God he got me
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Posted: Sun Dec 10, 2006 12:49 pm
Well, you already know what I think, but it's cool ^^ My favorite line has to be "burning fire
cold desire
take me by the hand
take me near
the desert of fear
and drop me in the sand...."
It sounds cool and gives a good, metaphorical image smile I like it ^^
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