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Posted: Sat Dec 09, 2006 11:06 am
Tell us how u became an angel of death! best story will win a prize! rules. 1. u can enter as many stories as u want! 2. Keep the story as short as possible!!!! 3. keep the story pg13 and under!!(little to no cusing) 4. have fun and be nice.
The winner will be announced on friday if i can remember(i have a bad memory) but i will be giving out a prize. No pm's asking what the prize is, or u will be disqualifyed(i hope i spelled that right)but the prize is something useful and good!
i will judge the story on neatness, spelling, not grammer(i hate grammer),and creativity(hope that is spelled right). i will have a dictionary with me. and one last thing, u can rate stories by replying with a name of the author and a score out of 10! have fun!
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Posted: Sat Dec 09, 2006 3:59 pm
here is the first part. more it to come.
Meeyu's story:
In a distant land far off in an unexplored area of the world was an island. On this island was a race of people with out names, they knew each other by thire faces sence the island was so small, and were kind to everyong to the poit that no crimes were comitted so there was no need to have any laws or rules. The lush green tropical island was at peace for many years untill one day a black cloud covered the island. It was almost venomess on how the raindrops fell fom it and they seemed to burn ones skin as they landed apon you. the sky got so black that night was day and day never seemed to come. No one knew what it was that sent this evil thing to their home and noone knew how to send it away. As time went by the people on the island grew cold and crule, they would steal from eachother and fights would start with no warning and for no reason. the colder the nights the colder the people became, Meeyus father the leader of the people was forced to create order and enfoce it. he gave power to his closis tand most trusted men telling then to stop all fights and Return stolen goods to the rightfull owners. Though they were the most trusted of the people they too were curupted. the men would stop the fights but would also hur the fighters so badl that they would become bed ridden. the things stolen were found... but were not given back, instead they kept the items for them selves..
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Posted: Sat Dec 09, 2006 4:30 pm
It all started one morning last week. I awoke in a daze to find myself drowned in a pool of blood. I could not see much because of the faint light emitted from the candle behide me. As I arose I came face to face with death. "Why am I here?" I asked. He placed boney his hand on my shoulder and said "this is not your time, I will send you back but on one condition." "Yes!?" I said. "You must make the others believe." death whispered. Confused, I stood contemplating this mission as death disappeared into the darkness. I ran after him "How can I make the believe in death!" I shouted. Silence... as I listened I heard a faint whisper with the wind "Awaken." Just After that word was uttered I felt a sharp pain rush up my spine. I awoke in the ER. The doctor looked over me and said "You should be dead, the bullet went straight through your heart and was embeded in your spine." "But there is no wound" I exclaimed as I pointed to my chest. "God must be watching over you," He said. "No," I exclamed, "it's not God"
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Posted: Sat Dec 09, 2006 6:07 pm
In the middle of a lazy night where not even dogs stirred, an intruding shadow stalks it's prey. "It's pretty quite.. it's too quite.. that's weird.." I said to myself. I stopped and studied my surroundings. Noting that nothing appears out of the usuall, I contintue onward home. As i walked down the lonely street, I thought I heard footsteps. When i turned around, the empty sky greeted me. Putting a confused look on my face, i continued my walk. "Man.. i shouldn't have gone to this stupid party... and now my car dies in the middle of nowhere... and I'm freaked out also.. stupid party..." i muttered to myself. Keeping my head down and stomping out my anger, i didn't notice the shadow looming closer and closer to me. I continued walking when all of a sudden, dogs started crying for no reasons. Not only were they barking from where i was walking, but it was from all over. I stop to puzzle over this little situation when a stranger's voice poked out of nowhere. "Where are you heading?" I spun around to stand face to face when a handsome tall dark hair stranger. He smiled a reassuring smile that made me smile back. "...Home..." I said as I continued my walk. "These parts are dangerous, shouldn't you walk with a friend or have them pick you up or something?" He asked while falling into my stride. "No one is coming for me... i left that jerk back in the party... so no one is comeing for me... " I turn my head to look at him and continued with a smile, "...That is unless it's you. Then by all means... come. We have many miles to cover." "I have a way where miles goes as fast as time itself." said the stranger. "Do you want to try that?" "If it beats walking, I'll do anything..."
"Anything? how about you stick with me?" Suggested the stranger. "You mean...like a boyfriend thing? I just got out of a stupid relatioinship... I need time..." I replied walking a bit faster than usual. "I can supply you the life you so wanted. A cabin in the forest... you writing your novel with no one to bother you but me coming home to you... all I ask is that you cook for me... nothing much..." The words weighed heavily on my mind. After not much thinking onto the matter, I agreed to go with him. "Good." he said. "I just got to call some of my friends to cover my job while i take you away." The stranger dialed on a phone that was not familiar to me. It looked like a twig. When the stranger snaped the twig in half, it bursted up into flames. "That's soo awesome! How did you do that?" "It comes with the job." He said with a board grin. "Now if we continue to walk straight, we'll come across a car; that car will take us to where you want..." Somewhere in the background, a house bursted up into flames. People screamed in horror as big explosions boomed. "... and if you like, we can watch the fireworks..." He turns me around just in time to see another huge explosion as the house fell down on it's foundation. "Hey isn't that the house party that I went to?" I asked as the firetrucks and ambulances raced by us. "Why I do believe so.. I do believe so... come or else we will be late." Upon a matters of seconds, a taxi appeared out of nowhere. The stranger opened the door, while I slid in the back seat, he followed in after me. The taxi driver turns around and smiles a knowing smile. "Where to Death?" "Take us to the edge of... " Death looks me in the eye, daring me to move... "... a big forest..." "Whatever you like, man..." The taxi raced off into the street, into the horizon, and into the ocean. At last when it seems like a dream, the taxi pulls into a bone-jarring stop. "We're here." said the taxi driver. "Thanks" I got out of the taxi uncertain on what laid ahead of me while Death's hand guided me to our awaiting cabin.
(ok no more!! )
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