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 Posted: Wed Jun 15, 2005 9:49 am
I guess i'll kick this off with one of my poems..and yes, the mis-spellings are on purpose. Don't ask why, it's too complicated. I wrote this today..
Equilibrium
The balance between Life and Deth
Has robbed many of their breath
I plan for it to be disturbed
As my blade obeys the urge
That precious equilibrium
Shall be slain, bringing a change
Each and every atrium
Crumbles as I open my own veins
For to tip the scales in Deth's favour
Will be the one feelings I shall savour
A razor's glinting, icy kiss
Shall bring to me eternal bliss
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Posted: Wed Jun 15, 2005 11:46 am
i like that. it's.....i don't know what it is, but i like it!
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Posted: Wed Jun 15, 2005 1:06 pm
Raven thats really really really really......beautiful and wrong in the same way....
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Posted: Thu Jun 16, 2005 4:20 am
Most of my writing ends up that way, i guess...ok, this one i wrote in Physics yesterday. its far from over, and i was doing my best to write it while paying attention to whatever the teacher was talking about (see it didnt work lol), but here's this part of it:
Avatars
Elegantly dressed in dark
Long black hair like silk
Eyes cold and cruelly shining
Such is the figure of Woe
Pain lifts his ragged head
To gaze forth at his love
Woe nods and Pain smiles
Takes her hand in his
Justice shakes his head in disgust
Hefts his giant glowing blade
His long white hair falls in his eyes
As creamy robes snap in the wind
Might flexes muscled arms
Her eyes are hard and proud
She readjusts her leathers clothes
and steps forth to face Misery
Misery is lithe and strong
His katar blades are curved and sharp
His tall forbidding form unfolds
Ready to tear Hope apart
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Posted: Thu Jun 16, 2005 8:04 pm
Wow....that poem "Avatars" is awsome, just awsome. I want to go into more depth and explain why, but I can't it is just too cool.
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Posted: Fri Jun 17, 2005 1:48 am
Here's another..
Love, finally
Each moment i will think of you
and wonder if you love me too
And you know, i think you do
This feeling inside of me
Gets stronger as i think of this:
When i see you, we shall kiss
I'm not longer what i was
Now my heart is all abuzz
And i know its all because
I love you..
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Posted: Fri Jun 17, 2005 6:49 am
I really like Avatars! I can't wait til it's done, because I want to draw it. Who knows I might even doll it. . that would give me a nice project for the next couple days. Love, Finally is very nice.
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Posted: Sat Jun 18, 2005 1:43 am
Toshiro_Umezawa Here's another.. Love, finallyEach moment i will think of you and wonder if you love me too And you know, i think you do This feeling inside of me Gets stronger as i think of this: When i see you, we shall kiss I'm not longer what i was Now my heart is all abuzz And i know its all because I love you.. Raven that is beautiful, did you write that for a certain some one or just because you could?
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Posted: Sat Jun 18, 2005 4:00 am
All of my poems have inspiration from something. But in that one's case, it was someONE. I wrote it for someone i love. ^_^
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Posted: Sat Jun 18, 2005 8:43 am
Toshiro_Umezawa All of my poems have inspiration from something. But in that one's case, it was someONE. I wrote it for someone i love. ^_^ Awe thats so sweet! *huggels Raven* You're just the sweetest guy ever! sweatdrop Sorry I think its cute....and sweet....did I mention sweet? lol but whoever you wrote it for must have loved it, youre a very talented writer Raven; but if you ever end up writing a book that becomes huge, youre gonna have to sign it Raven so we know who wrote it. And then when everyone of us comes to your autograph signing, we'll have to give you our gaia name so you can go "DUDE! Youre that person! In the writing forum!" and then youll know who we are lol. I know i'm rambling but I cant help myself......blame it on the voices....'>>.....<<'.....><;
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Posted: Sun Jun 19, 2005 5:56 am
LOL! I'll sign "Raven" with the Author's Note..dedicate the book to you all if you give me your first names. ^_^
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Posted: Sun Jun 19, 2005 8:06 am
Alright, well, in case you forgot mine, it's Maya. I know Tenda's name. . . But she'll give it to you herself, I'm sure.
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Posted: Sun Jun 19, 2005 9:55 am
lol My real names Amanda.....blah....I hate it.....its so ordinary......I wanna change my name to....*dramatic music plays in back ground*.....Alegra! I know its so random....but thats my name in my friends book and I like it.....its original.....
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Posted: Sun Jun 19, 2005 6:09 pm
I dunno if that's a good idea. When people think of you, they'll either think of an allergy medicine, or really complex math formulas. xp
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Posted: Mon Jun 20, 2005 8:31 am
Sweetypop I dunno if that's a good idea. When people think of you, they'll either think of an allergy medicine, or really complex math formulas. xp *dies from laughing so hard* O...M....G.....I was eating cerial and I almost choked because I started laughing when I read your post......>< heres a tip: Dont go to the bright light, even if its shiny; its a trick! *waves arms* 'Jesus' is waiting there with a dagger! RUN AWAY! *runs away*
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