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 Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 10:46 am
Working on piece, and need some help with a something that is bothering you about your picture?
Or have finished works of art you just want some feed back on?
Well here is the place for that type of thing.
If you can handle Critic , then go ahead and post here.
(Being honest doesn't always mean being a b*****d.)
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Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2007 9:54 am
Well, I'll post my art here, seen as the art arena keeps getting lousy results. I can't seem to get a good comment, unless it is someone from my own guild. sweatdrop
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Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2007 9:57 am
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Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2007 10:00 am
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Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2007 10:01 am
And my newest one for Gaia. Still waiting for this one to be approved in the art arena... Comments? 
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Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2007 3:47 pm
I'm really glad to see someone place their work here for critic.
I really find his expression to hold me somehow, it doesn't seem like he's looking at scenery is he looking towards anyone? Is he extending his hand to another?
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Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2007 4:27 pm
The last picture? I finished it actually.
I'll have to rescan and recolor it when I get some time. Until then, the vision I had for that one was he was walking and someone got his attention. He is in a mid-turn to go and look at the person.
In the finish project, he is actually holding a clipboard in his hand. I think that one I will add in a hallway like a school building.
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Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2007 6:35 pm
Actually I love this pic, the smile cheers me up. You convey a sense of care free happiness with that smile. Or am I wrong?
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Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2007 6:39 pm
Your right. That was the intent.
(You should see some of the comments I got on that in the arena... stare )
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Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2007 7:06 pm
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Posted: Sun Feb 11, 2007 5:39 pm
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Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 8:29 am
Something new. Tell me what you all think? 
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Posted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 8:32 pm
It's difficult to critic this one I like it a lot but you all know I'm easy to please.
I'm not so sure what the y shape in the forehad is, furrowed brow skin?
Is he shouting or has he been blown off balance?
Is he angry or embaraced?
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Posted: Tue Feb 27, 2007 9:19 am
In most of the anime that I have seen that pose is normally in response to someone making fun of them in an embarrassing way.
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Posted: Tue Feb 27, 2007 9:51 am
Actually, he is riding a horse for the first time, at a full gallop as well. I'll draw the other pieces later and put them all together on Photoshop eventually. He is kinda screaming hysterically, scared but trusting the person in front of him on the horse to keep him safe. For full story, read this page and the next. http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=6932697&page=2
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