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PostPosted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 7:38 pm


I've seen other people have their own little poetry threads, and I was jealous, so I decided to make one of my own. I suppose this will be the place I post my poetry! Please give me any comments or critiques (SP?) on my stuff! Say anything about it, as long as you don't flame or tell me I suck without giving good reason, because then you'll make me cry. crying We wouldn't want that, now would we? sweatdrop
PostPosted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 7:45 pm


Schoolhouse Slumber

As these words seep through the crevices of my mind
like poison - winding, twisting, stirring into my brain
until it becomes nothing but a ghastly glob of gray goop -
all that is left in it's place is a simple nothingness.

I see my day as it was given to me, rushing by
as if it were in some kind of hurry. I don't know
why it can't just slow down and give me a moment
to dwell amongst my thoughts on all that occurred throughout my day.

I drift off, giving into what begins as a brief release
of all the air trapped within my lungs and clearly becomes
a blur of words upon pages that end up lost in translation.
A sudden shuffle of feet and clashing of desks brings me

back into consciousness; alert and ready to take on
yet another hour. Forced to interact with a handful of prisoners
who cannot seem to comprehend simple mathematics,
I have slowly been driven mad. Stupidity has replaced their ignorance.

*edit* WOW I didn't realize my silly typos. I fixed those. Not that it matters TOO much... lol

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 7:51 pm


Untitled
(any reccomendations would be greatly appreciated!)

Bleeding you from me
was the hardest thing to do.
Your blood flows through my very existance.
Your shadow still lingers in the back of my mind.

You were never "Daddy;" I was never your girl.
You thought you could control me
like some demented puppeteer.
You took me for stupid.

Every memory of you that is caged
inside my mind is clouded with fear; sorrow; pain.
Believing that monsters could be found
inside everyone, I feared the world.

Nightmares intertwined with reality; all I knew
was that nothing could fix the hurt you put
on mommy and me. Now I can't stand to see
your smug grin - knowing you choke on your lies.

I feel your deceptions burning, leaving an emptiness
deep within me. I can't once more believe
you ever loved me. Never again.
I won't let myself believe that you loved me.
PostPosted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 8:05 pm


Sleep to Dream

My morbid fire; this deathly flame.
Your life and mine are not the same.
You are the liquid, I am the fire;
Because of you, I will soon expire.

Bleeding my life; pouring my soul.
All that's left is this empty whole.
The living dead, this internal light
both fade away into the black of the night.

These little voises; their sultry sounds -
Reminding me of what I found.
So much torture, so much pain;
so many words, all spoken in vain.

Such shallow waters, as cold as ice.
Why is it "us" that they despise?
Only hatred fills this head,
and it will not cease until I'm dead.

So many horrid thoughts
all here, invading me,
and as I lay me down to sleep,
I only sleep to dream.

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 28, 2006 7:59 pm


Good job just keep writing
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