FFVII and X fanfic. the return of the nightmare Sephiroth.

[Squad 45]

hey guys i was wondering if you could tell me if this is a good story line.
okay here i go.
This story takes place after Vegnigun was distroyed, one year to be exact. Tidus is back with Yuna and now they are Married with a child named Summer. the main charaters from VII are in the story as well, but Cid from VII is Rikku's dad. he just changed his apearence a little so no one that he knew would notice him. FFVII's planet has imploded on them and most of the people escaped with they're lives intack. others chose to die. well the main charaters have come to Spira for safty of they're own planet. Cloud and Tifa had one child, a boy named Zack. and then had a little girl on Besaid named Aerith(english game of FFVII). Denzel and Marline are all grown up now. Barret stayed in the Al Behd home coaching the BlitzBall team. Vincent was Hiding out in Zanarkand. Cait Sith and Red XIII were with Barret and Cid. Yuffie was also in Luca having fun with Shelke and Reeve(Yuffie and Reeve are taking care of Shelke).
jsut tell me what you think right now have other things to do right now i'll add more to this later.  

[Squad 45]

Kaydienne

doing crossovers is always tricky but honestly I can see your storyline being plausable if you write it right

If you want a beta reader Ill be happy to lend a hand. I am a beta reader for a couple of writers of fan fiction.

thanks i really apreachate it(not great at spelling). i sent you a message. i hope you get it. but i hope that you guys can tell me if you like were this is going.  

[Squad 45]

does anyone else have anything to say about my story?