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Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2006 7:29 pm

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Posted: Mon Nov 06, 2006 2:24 pm

The Pain of Solitude and Silence

the ultimate pain of solitude and silence
broken by the sounds of wimpering
blood is everywhere
spelling out the horror of what happened
telling no lies
and giving no explination

fear overwhelms the victim
whos sitting in the corner
the blade lays on the floor
covered in red liquid
the victim is dying
but he's enjoying every second

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It's not complete but I think its good enough to get this started out.

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Posted: Mon Nov 06, 2006 2:32 pm

The Madness

If Today is tomorrow
and tomorrow is today
Where do I belong
How am I existing

Is life this simple
or is it harder then i make it
What is it that I need
What is it that I want

If it ended now
Where did it begin
How did it start
and when will it end

Am I to far over my head
or am I just crazy
Should I end this madness
or is it time to let the madness end me

Posted: Mon Nov 06, 2006 2:35 pm

The Pain Of Hatred

As the pain of hatred grows
It kills the joy of life
Showing no mercy
Showing no emotion
Killing all in its path

Hatred is the sorce of all evil
Growing and killing with no discrimination
Killing its enemies
Killing its friends
Giving pain to all in its path

Causing pain to youself
Is the only medication for hatred
Bleeding the well dry
And once it's dry
Death can reach you quietly

Self-mutalation could be the answer
Soetimes its not
Keep this in mind
'Cause hatred is eternal
Hatred grows like a paracite
Feeding off its vessel
Once the vessel is dry
There is no way to survive

So kill the hatred now
Before it grows to strong
And remember to keep your friends close
And your enemies even closer.

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Posted: Mon Nov 06, 2006 2:36 pm

The Pill

Give it up
Life is over
There is no return from death
Let the angel of death cary you to your resting place
And accept where you are put

Let go of your friends
Give up on your family
They were able to do but so much
You could have stoped it
But you still took the pill

30 seconds of life is all you had
And all you did was laugh
When you were found you had a smile on your face
You smiled like death was your saviour
But look where death took you

Your stuck in the dark
Screaming for some love
Nobody cares
Nobody knows you
For you are dead
Give it up
You did this to your self
Now sit in silence
And wait for the day of Judgment.

Posted: Mon Nov 06, 2006 2:37 pm

Judgment Day

Judgment day has arrived
And everyone has just died
Your no longer lonely
But nobody knows you

You begin to attack
You begin to torment
You have become what you always hated

Attack who you love
Attack who you fear
For you are hatred its self

Now end this day
The day of Judgment
And bring a new era of pain.

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Posted: Mon Nov 06, 2006 2:38 pm

The End

Now you have done it
You have no place to go
You have become what you have hated

Wandering through heaven
Wandering through hell
Trying to find your place

Your face grows pale
And everything dims
The end has drawn near

You try to fight it off
You tryed what you can
But there is no cure

You sit in one spot
Staring at nothing
And welcome the end of your life.

Posted: Mon Nov 06, 2006 2:40 pm

The Killings

He's only thirteen
But you feel no pain
As you take his head off with one swing

His mother walks in
And begins to scream
So cut off her neck

You begin to flee
But you see the three
The three who said to do it

You end there life
With one big a** laugh
And you flee into the night

The day is over
You enjoy your new life
Now be ready for it all to end.

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Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2006 5:17 pm

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o-o So depressing. D: I have one about death. Lemme dig it up from my achives. I wrote it forever ago. xD

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Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2006 5:20 pm

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Heart and Soul

The soul is like a bird;
fluttering
in the wind,
soaring far
above the clouds.

The heart is a drum;
monotonously,
it beats
the rhythm
of the soul.

The drum has stopped beating,
for it is broken;
a wing of the bird
has been bent.
Now, they are both no longer.

The heart is bleeding.
The bird stopped singing.
I will cry for you.
Why must
it end like this?

You have rocked me
To sleep,
Sung me plentiful songs,
And stayed by my bedside
Until I was in another world.

My world was not far;
I would rise back up soon.
When the break of day
shines upon my face,
I will wake.

But in deep despair,
how will you rise
from the
deepest sleep
that no one survives?

Your end is near.
You have taught me much.
I know
I shall never forget
the echoes.

So, now my drum bleeds
for your mute bird
and her
broken wing.
I cry.

And I wonder why –
why you?
Not others
who deserve
to leave this world.

[Jay Chou - Kai Bu Liao Kou.]

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Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2006 5:25 pm

thats good.
all my poetry is dark and depressing.

Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2006 6:48 pm

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o-o;; I can tell. Lol.

You should publish all your poetry in a book. It shows how stupid the world can be these days.

Oh, and I'd like to point out that it's "Wandering through Heaven/Wandering through Hell". Lol. xD

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Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2006 8:08 pm

o0....yah i suk at spelling

Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2006 9:13 pm

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Lol. So does Gamer. xD Dun tell him I said that. -runs away-

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Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2006 9:25 pm

You don't have to mock me for my spelling. I already know it sucks. stare Then again I could just tell you how much of a hyporite(yes, I know I spelt this wrong -_-) you are.....wait, I already do that. XD

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