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 Posted: Fri Oct 27, 2006 12:51 am
The Sun sets fast,
And the night has me;
I'm on the ground,
Supine and helpless;
After all this time,
I'm numb to the pain;
The feet and the fists,
The rocks and splinters;
Always, however futile,
I crawl away;
I'm followed and kept down,
With curses and spit;
Everything I've ever loved,
Anyone I've ever hated;
All of it taken away,
Even the shadow of shadows;
The Sun rises slow,
And I get up;
Battered and broken,
I simply keep walking.
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Posted: Sat Oct 28, 2006 7:37 am
Ok that was a little on the depressing side. More than a little actually. I wish things coud be different.
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Posted: Sat Oct 28, 2006 8:34 am
Whaaat, but that was supposed to be an OPTIMISTIC poem!!
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Posted: Sat Oct 28, 2006 12:47 pm
If that is optimistic....then I am a monkey's uncle.
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Posted: Sat Oct 28, 2006 8:55 pm
Well, it's supposed to say that no matter how hard someone gets beat down by life, they just get up and keep walking, dusting one's self off, ya know? Like, no matter how low things get, you gotta rise up despite the pain. With every new sun comes new opportunities, and what not
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Posted: Sun Oct 29, 2006 9:24 am
Oh ok, I did not get that.
The Sun rises slow,
And I get up;
Battered and broken,
I simply keep walking.
Maybe it is the word "simply". I should have gotten that but I did not.
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Posted: Fri Nov 03, 2006 11:37 pm
I dunno seemed pretty opptomistic to me. By the way I like that one alot Ethan biggrin
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Posted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 5:17 pm
danke, danke!! (I honestly should start leaving comments on ppls' works, too... neutral )
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