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 Posted: Mon Oct 23, 2006 3:43 pm
I'm your Angel, I'm your Goddess...
I hope you guys like them... Fanfiction Title: Once Again Genre: Romance Couples/Parings: AsuXCag other implyed pairing Rated: G Summary: An after Destiny fiction. What happens to Cagalli and Athrun after the war. Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2783311/1/Status: Complete Fanfiction Title: Again and Again Genre: Romance, Drama Couples/Parings: AsuXCag Other implyed pairing Rated: PG Summary: An alternate version of what happens after the war. Post Destiny. Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3106861/1/ Status: Complete
I'm your Princess, I'm your songstress...
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Posted: Wed Oct 25, 2006 5:07 pm
sweet titles. i'm gonna read them now...
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Posted: Wed Oct 25, 2006 5:50 pm
i think you have great potential in being a writer. some of it is a bit farfetched in regards to the characters personalities (like Meyrin pulling a trigger in Again and Again =P), but it is full of dramatic moments and romance, and i llike it! great job =3
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Posted: Fri Oct 27, 2006 8:07 am
I'm your Angel, I'm your Goddess...
Thank-you for the compliment Angel. Yeah.. I know Meyrins character is a bit out there... But it just seemed to work in my head...
I'm your Princess, I'm your songstress...
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Posted: Sat Oct 28, 2006 3:48 pm
girls and guns! the best parts of gundam seed =D
overall i liked it...but maybe it could've been more....flowing?
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Posted: Mon Oct 30, 2006 9:59 am
Hello...so far I only read the first one "Once Again."
I liked the idea of it and it was really sweet. I agree with most of what Angel said except I haven't read "Again and Again" yet. Keep working on your grammer and character personalities and you're be a great author in no time.
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Posted: Mon Oct 30, 2006 10:12 am
Fanfic #2...
I actually liked it better than the first one, but still I say you need to work on your grammer and spelling errors. And the characters were pretty much OOC...well really it was Meyrin.
I thought the whole thing with Shinn was funny. xp
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Posted: Mon Oct 30, 2006 4:36 pm
both stories were pretty good. the second one was tons better XD
meyrin seemed a bit too dramatic, but shinn was awesome.
nice metaphors. work a bit on your grammar though.
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Posted: Mon Oct 30, 2006 5:07 pm
nice work! i love the athrun and cagalli moment in once and again ^^
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Posted: Wed Nov 08, 2006 2:21 pm
I'm your Angel, I'm your Goddess...
I apologise for my grammer, speaking 2 languages gets kind of wierd in grammer...
I'm your Princess, I'm your songstress...
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Posted: Wed Nov 08, 2006 6:26 pm
that's okay! what two languages do you speak?
o0oh maybe you can write that oneshot again in your other language? XD that would be cool, and good practice...
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Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 3:51 pm
If it's spanish then I'm all for it!
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Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 5:04 pm
lol, japanese or chinese for me! or french sort of...but i suppose it is neither chinese or japanese is it? ^^"
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Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 9:36 am
I'm your Angel, I'm your Goddess...
I'm French...
I might right one in French one day, but for now, I'll stick to English writing... I need more practice in it anyways...
I'm your Princess, I'm your songstress...
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Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 4:11 pm
sweet! brian's half french, but he speaks it awesomely. maybe you two can converse XD
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