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For a first time with story writing, what do you think?
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Kharne Bloodhowler
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 17, 2006 5:54 pm


[align=center][color=darkred][size=9][i]---Location: Thomas's room---Feeling: Tired, Helpful, CLEAN---Action:Trying to talk to Thomas---[/i][/size][/color] [img]http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb180/animeroses/cole.jpg[/img] [size=18][color=Silver]Simon[/color] [color=#696969]Samantha[/color] [color=#6C7B8B]Coleson[/color][/size] [size=12] [b][i][color=#0ABAB5]~!~!~Call me Sammy Or Cole~!~!~[/color][/i][/b] [/size] [color=#1464F4]♥~Simon sighed and looked at Thomas with a raised eyebrow but smiled some anyways despite the boy's claim of EVENTUALLY. [b]"Why wait when people can help?" [/b]He mused getting up and walking to Thomas's bathroom to dump the grabage out. He was met with a shattered mirror scattered about the floor. Someone obviously had a tantrum and went on a shattering streak to vent. Poor boy was probably scared and very alone right now.[b] "My name is Simon. Your Thomas right?" [/b]He asked as he once again began to sweep up glass for the boy. He could easily hurt himself with so many sharp bits about to poke into his foot, or if he fell other soft places. He cleaned up the glass in the bathroom and dumped it all into the trash. It was late at night and he was cleaning, who would of guessed? [b]"You know, if you want to talk i'm willing. We got off on the wrong foot it seems and that doesn't usually happen... So Hi there! I'm Simon nice to meet you[/b]" He grinned as he exited the bathroom and offered the boy his right hand to shake. The boy could be pretty if he lost all the acne he had. Simon was sure the place would have zit creams and soft face washes to help remove most of the painful looking blemishes. His mother used to just pop them and be done with it but that bad? It would scar if not treated correctly. But that was the boy's matter, if he asked for help he was willing to try. ~♥[/color] [b][i][size=9][color=#0BB5FF]~♦♦...If love depended on only beauty alone, We'd be one under-populated world right about now...♦♦~[/color][/size][/i] [/b] Only.One.Cat: [/align]
PostPosted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 9:18 am


Dude! Like... holy crap! Man, this rocks!!! I WANT MORE!!!!!!!!

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Kharne Bloodhowler
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 10:22 am


As more comes along, I shall write more. This is more of a short story than anything else considering the events move pretty fast.
PostPosted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 2:47 pm


tis interesting....hehe very masochist sounding...must be why I want to read more...ah well...tis good, but I need far more to develop a more definite opinion on it...

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 2:52 pm


That is because it is very masochist-ish indeed. The world I developed places females at the highest points of society and the males are weaker than females. I suppose that is just my masochist part of me. Anyway, April is very much a sadist who tortured the now God King werewolf, Kharne Bloodhowler. His last name was given to him for his unique abilities. If you ever played D&D and used a bard, you would kind of get an idea for why he has the last name that he does.

There are other specifics that I would rather leave unrevealed for my personal reasons.
PostPosted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 2:58 pm


tis the same with the characters in broken dream...although not masochistic it is a very complex world...a cross between many of my favorite authors as well as many folk tales I've heard of about the fey...

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 3:14 pm


interesting.
PostPosted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 3:20 pm


...what is?

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Kharne Bloodhowler
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 3:49 pm


Fey, of course. Nah, the reason I said "interesting" was because of the "complex world" comment. I would like to know what you mean by complex world....but of course, if you continue posting, I am sure that I will obtain the answers that I seek.
PostPosted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 4:02 pm


stare sweetheart....it's complicated because it's coming from my brain...that and the fact that I need to do the whole goddamned thing over again...I've been working on it...or at least seeing it in my head for about five years now and it's all ******** up...ARGH!!!! no matter how much I try I know where I am and where I want to go...but I can never get there succesfully...do you know how annoying that is? I've been that way forever...although that-nvm...another story...one few know anywho eventually I'll be able to figure it all out, but if you've seen my last post in Broken Dream...it kinda explains why I can't really concentrate on it too much right now...I want to bang my head against the wall and hope some thing gets sorted in my brain...

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Kharne Bloodhowler
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 4:53 pm


Heheheh, I know the feeling. My story, which has no name yet, has been running about in my head for some time now(at least a year.) I never could find the words to even make a start on it.
PostPosted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 5:20 pm


well I've got two at once, than five fanfics...eternal bits of poems to start, but never do...I write down the bits and pieces...but I always coompose the most interesting ones while I'm walking home and have no paper to write on...and if I stop to write I lose what I had walking...very frustrating Greg has become...

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Kharne Bloodhowler
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 6:32 pm


Quite annoying, is it not? I always have some paper and a pen around for just in case purposes.
PostPosted: Fri Oct 20, 2006 7:51 am


mmm...tis a good thing then...but I must continue walking to create the piece and if you must know anything about me...I am a complete clutz and thus cannot write while walking...

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PostPosted: Fri Oct 20, 2006 11:43 am


Ah. Can you chew gum and walk?
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