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X_X_zero_X_X

PostPosted: Tue Oct 17, 2006 4:14 pm


I'm In Love With Alice Snow Pt.1
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Her skin is almost white, her eyes a fierce silver blue. She walks with a certain grace, that only she could posess, with her head down toward the floor. Her raven hair pooling into her face. She's so mesmerizing, everything about her, satisfying.

I am in love with Alice Snow.

I watch her walk to class,and I know where she lives. I keep an eye on her, I protect her, though she never knows a thing. I'm there when she feels alone. I weep with her when she is sad. I slay all the demons that make her mad,though she never knows a thing.

She is such the perfect creature, silent and poised. I wish that she were mine and mine only until death. I would touch my hand to her cheek, press my lips ever so softly against hers. We would stare lovingly at each other, pretty silver blue eyes meeting my dull brown. Then softly in that breathy light tone that only my love could posess, she would say "I love you". Then my love, my dear, my everything, and I could be happy. We will always be happy,be it in love or in death.

We would be happy,but if someone would dare to part us, and I bet you they would. I will spill their blood on the walls for all to see as a warning. I would profess my love while everyone is mourning, and I will have no regrets, no guilt.

My name is Vincent,and I'm deeply in love with my beloved Alice Snow.
PostPosted: Tue Oct 17, 2006 7:17 pm


Well, you certainly weren't lying when you said 'short story'. It's quite short, but does relay a certain message and meaning. I like it. Simple, to the point, but descriptive and emotional in a way. Kudos!

Isis375
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X_X_zero_X_X

PostPosted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 12:34 pm


I would post more...but it starts getting to a point where Gaia wouldn't allow it.....Violent...still the same deep aspects though.
PostPosted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 2:45 pm


tis good....reminds me of both kingdom hearts and final fantasy....such an odd combination, but nonetheless it is what comes to mind to this wonderful story...however short it may be...

chaos_incarnite91


X_X_zero_X_X

PostPosted: Thu Oct 19, 2006 1:03 pm


Pt.2..WARNING...If your mind can't stand the graphic description of semi-gore...read at your own risk...

I walked her home today,always a block away,in step with her every move,just so that I wouldn't disturb her.I always look out for her,to make her safe,but after all my attempts to make my love happy she betrayed me.
I watched from the window she had been careless enough not to pull the drapes in on. I saw her,talking to him,in her room,lying on the bed. He must have been clever because he got her attention,she laughed.....and they kissed.
My thoughts stumbled,but I knew what I had to do. I gathered myself,and walked home in the rain. He would pay for hypnotising my darling and tainting her love for me.He would be punished for not caring for her like I do,for forcing her to betray me. He will pay.
Still walking home plotting,but also thinking of my sweet Alice and how that should have been me in there...me...with her. Her... in my arms.
My anger gave me the strength to come back and follow him home. The stupid one left his window unlocked. I climbed into his room and I waited in the dark,in silence. Soon the room was filled with his soft breaths of sleep and I knew it was then that I could do what I cam for.
He screamed so loud,but no one came. I never stopped ripping flesh from bone,a slice for all the things he stole that belonged to me. A kiss and a touch from her splatter painted his walls and scarred his flesh. It was a long time before I stopped,long after his pulse had slowed and stopped,after the blood had stopped coming in gushes.
My name is Vincent,and I would do anything for Alice Snow.
PostPosted: Fri Oct 20, 2006 7:50 am


totally awesome...I am in awe eek

chaos_incarnite91


X_X_zero_X_X

PostPosted: Fri Oct 20, 2006 1:14 pm


Thanks,There are a total of 10 parts so far,but there not all typed yet.
PostPosted: Sun Oct 22, 2006 3:51 pm


well hop to it girl xp jjk you don't have to...but please hurry...

chaos_incarnite91


X_X_zero_X_X

PostPosted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 3:22 pm


Pt. 3

Alice,I know your afraid,but,oh my sweet I will keep you locked here until you promise to love me. You will show me you love or I will take it from you. I'm sick of all this trying on my part, my torn heart won't let me proceed any longer.
Now I can touch you, feel you, love you, and though you scream at least I know you now see me, you know who I am. Now you can never leave me, now you can love me, now you will love me. I refuse to give up on you. I refuse to leave you. I refuse to let you go. I will never be over you, no matter how hard I do try. Days, months, years will pass and I will still keep you captive. Always professing my love until you understand my passion.
No one else can have you. You will love me. Now you know how I feel. Broken on the inside, wanting the escape that may never come for you, you just can't have it. Your choices lay in madness or death.
Survival will lead you to me. I promise. All it takes is time. Love. Time. Time. Love. Time. Survival. I can take you there my sweet, my love. My embraces may scare you but soon you will be consumed with desires that you may not have known exsisted. I know you will. You are so beautiful, don't worry, everyone will look for you,but never find you. My darling.
My name is Vincent,and Alice Snow belongs to me.....
PostPosted: Wed Nov 08, 2006 8:45 pm


Oooh, getting good. Very possessive. Perhaps psychotic, but at least he loves her, eh? Heh, Can't wait for more.

Isis375
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Yukiko8

PostPosted: Sat Jan 19, 2008 7:14 am


I'm hooked..... surprised

Vincent reminds me of the 'Phantom of the Opera'....not sure why.
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