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Ausica

Eloquent Gaian

PostPosted: Thu Oct 07, 2004 2:11 am


Yeah. Come post your poetry here. I'll set up some rules or something later...but I'm experiencing a major bout of laziness.
Just try to keep the poetry nice and clean. No smut or erotica. domokun mad
And feel free to comment on each others poetry as long as you are respectful and constructive in your opinion. No meanies. scream

And I will post that crappy poem that I made today. gonk

Hold me...
Touch my face...
Your tender touch...
Your heart beat...
It beats with mine
Our souls entwined.
I close my eyes..

Dreams of you...
I look into myself..
The pool of my soul...
And you are reflected
In its calm surface.

Warm embrace.
Soft whispers.
Feeling your presence...
Calling to me.
I want you...
Here with me...

The touch of lips.
The happy tears..
You are so close...
Your soul resonates with mine...

The music in our hearts..
Sweet melodies replay..
I dance with you.
On the stage of dreams.
And I smile..

You and me...
Should be..

Together

Yes I know. It not good. What you think?
PostPosted: Thu Oct 07, 2004 2:12 am


Didn't I already tell you it was great? 3nodding xp

Er... I don't think I can come up with anything good at the moment. sweatdrop

l Aravilar l


Ausica

Eloquent Gaian

PostPosted: Thu Oct 07, 2004 2:15 am


Aravilar-sama
Didn't I already tell you it was great? 3nodding xp

Er... I don't think I can come up with anything good at the moment. sweatdrop
Shush Ara. I'm my own toughest critic. xd

But I'm sure that you will think of something. 3nodding
PostPosted: Thu Oct 07, 2004 2:18 am


One summer morning,

When the clear sunlight had peirced the summer breeze,

You disappeared out a sight,

No longer in this world do you exist,

No longer able to walk in the light of day,

No longer able to live the life you once had,

I know I will never see you again,

Because you are destined to roam in the cold darkness of the night,

And I am destined to roam in the protection of the light of day,

Even though we live in different worlds....our laughter will live on...immortalized within our memories,

intil the end of time...

Sorry if it is no good. >_<

Arioeh


Ausica

Eloquent Gaian

PostPosted: Thu Oct 07, 2004 2:19 am


Nyo...that was so pretty Shou. ^^ heart
PostPosted: Thu Oct 07, 2004 2:21 am


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Nyo...that was so pretty Shou. ^^ heart
T-thanks.. I have more but, I am not sure if it even count as poetry at all.

Arioeh


Ausica

Eloquent Gaian

PostPosted: Thu Oct 07, 2004 2:22 am


Oukage Shou
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Nyo...that was so pretty Shou. ^^ heart
T-thanks.. I have more but, I am not sure if it even count as poetry at all.
Well I would like to see more. 3nodding
PostPosted: Thu Oct 07, 2004 2:27 am


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Oukage Shou
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Nyo...that was so pretty Shou. ^^ heart
T-thanks.. I have more but, I am not sure if it even count as poetry at all.
Well I would like to see more. 3nodding
Maybe, I'll think about it..

Arioeh


Ausica

Eloquent Gaian

PostPosted: Thu Oct 07, 2004 2:29 am


Oukage Shou
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Nyo...that was so pretty Shou. ^^ heart
T-thanks.. I have more but, I am not sure if it even count as poetry at all.
Well I would like to see more. 3nodding
Maybe, I'll think about it..
I'd love it if you do decide to post more. I really liked the one that you posted just now. whee
PostPosted: Thu Oct 07, 2004 2:35 am


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Nyo...that was so pretty Shou. ^^ heart
T-thanks.. I have more but, I am not sure if it even count as poetry at all.
Well I would like to see more. 3nodding
Maybe, I'll think about it..
I'd love it if you do decide to post more. I really liked the one that you posted just now. whee
Thank you very much.. ^^ Well, I would like to see more of yours as well. =P

Arioeh


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PostPosted: Thu Oct 07, 2004 2:35 am


Aravilar-sama
Didn't I already tell you it was great? 3nodding xp

Er... I don't think I can come up with anything good at the moment. sweatdrop
Good freakin' God. I told'er the same thing. >>;; I think she's got reading problems. D:
PostPosted: Thu Oct 07, 2004 2:38 am


Oukage Shou
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Nyo...that was so pretty Shou. ^^ heart
T-thanks.. I have more but, I am not sure if it even count as poetry at all.
Well I would like to see more. 3nodding
Maybe, I'll think about it..
I'd love it if you do decide to post more. I really liked the one that you posted just now. whee
Thank you very much.. ^^ Well, I would like to see more of yours as well. =P
Funny you should say that. I'm thinking of another one. whee

@Vulgar: What what? scream xd

Ausica

Eloquent Gaian


Arioeh

PostPosted: Thu Oct 07, 2004 2:39 am


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Funny you should say that. I'm thinking of another one. whee

@Vulgar: What what? scream xd
Oh, is that so? Planning on posting it?
I have not written any recent poetry in a long time.
PostPosted: Thu Oct 07, 2004 2:41 am


Oukage Shou
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Funny you should say that. I'm thinking of another one. whee

@Vulgar: What what? scream xd
Oh, is that so? Planning on posting it?
I have not written any recent poetry in a long time.
Yes. I suppose I will put it up. I'm almost done with it. 3nodding

Ausica

Eloquent Gaian


Arioeh

PostPosted: Thu Oct 07, 2004 2:45 am


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Oukage Shou
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Funny you should say that. I'm thinking of another one. whee

@Vulgar: What what? scream xd
Oh, is that so? Planning on posting it?
I have not written any recent poetry in a long time.
Yes. I suppose I will put it up. I'm almost done with it. 3nodding
;P Okay, I'll be sure to read it.. When I return that is. I have to go. It was really nice talking to you.
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