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KoriYosei

PostPosted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 8:57 am


bleh...it doesnt have a title, and i wrote it for english class....i've never written a sonnet before, so the syllibuls are kinda....messed up....and i couldnt remember the couplet, because i only had a draft with me, so i'll just change it later...

Your cold blue eyes, piercing through the mute dark
Smiling a kind smile, while hiding what's real
Gazing through the cruel night, stained by this mark
Masked by moonlight, not knowing what to feel

A hand reaching out through the darkness, waiting
Take it, uncertainly, now dont let go
Pain and confusion; the future pending
What's right, what's wrong? This decision will show

But now it's time, can you make the right choice?
There is strength inside, although it's unseen
Your guarded heart's wise, listen to it's voice
Time's foreshadow; close your eyes, watch your dreams

I will do all i can to help you here
Please do what's right, and decide what's most dear
PostPosted: Mon Oct 16, 2006 3:46 pm


intersting concept, can't tell who the one it's being written to is, but i like it!

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KoriYosei

PostPosted: Tue Oct 17, 2006 6:11 pm


Krynn_2
intersting concept, can't tell who the one it's being written to is, but i like it!
thanks ^.^
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