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Mmh...Don't REALLY know what it is, though.

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Posted: Sat Sep 23, 2006 7:21 pm

Mm...hm...

This is a random...thing that I made in second grade, and decided to re-draw/update it for the heck of it. Now, I do enjoy how it came out, except one problem.

It's on notebook paper, and when editing the lines out of it after scanning, it's quality was cut in half.

So, please do excuse the dragon head shot thing's low quality, and please give me tips on how to improve. (Especially with shading.)

With the lines:

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Posted: Sat Sep 23, 2006 7:52 pm

wow... i know this probably isn't the reaction you are looking for but....

i think that is the cutest thing!!!!! maybe it should have a mouth, though...

Katana~Takura
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Posted: Sat Sep 23, 2006 8:02 pm

Actually, I was just really expecting nothing.

And, yes, a mouth would be nice,

Except that would....mean I would mess it up because whenever I add a mouth,

I looks funny.

Posted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 7:21 am

....you did that in second grade??? ><;;

-ish jealous-

....um...it looks uber nice...like something from pokemon...
the shading can be a bit more varied...but thats just me

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Kiwi`sama
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Posted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 8:06 am

It's uber adorable. :3
Though I'm with Usagi.
I think you should add more shading into the eyes to give it more of an effect.

Posted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 5:28 pm

It did have shading in the eyes, it's just when getting rid of the lines, the shading became lighter.

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Lazuri-Hikari
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Posted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 5:56 pm

KKAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
if u did that in second grade, WOW
thats AWESOME
i dont lyke joooooo!!!!!!!!!>.<
jkjk LOL
yeah, a mouth would be nice

Posted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 7:20 pm

Hmm... you should have posted with the lines to start because it showed more detail.
Very good shading, but I think you should blend in the highlights in the eyes to give it more effect. Again.
I also have a pretty hard time telling where the light is coming from and stuff.

EDIT;;
I kept forgetting to add this because I was lazy.
You shouldn't outline the highlights in the eyes. ;D

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